will it ever stop?
i wrote this when my boyfriend/best friend dumped me so hope you like it.
Chapter 1
will it ever stop?
you know how to make me smile
you know how to make me laugh
why do you always ruin it for a while
it's always good the first half
then it all goes down hill
you say you don't care
you have a good skill
but you can never repair
all the damage you've done
to my soul and my heart
I thought you were my sun
is there ever a fresh star
to what you've done to me
you've broken me more
will I ever forgive thee
you got me hardcore
what should I do
how are you my friend
when you treat me like poo
is there no end
to how your treating
me I can't take it any more
this is more times then three
I don't like this war
thats happening between us
will it ever stop
it could more or less
be like a soda pop
exploding in our face
more then ever before
will we ever interlace
or just start another war
how long can this go on
I want it to stop
we can't keep expanding upon
this giant fight crop
I want it to end
but will it ever
I want to be friends
but you don't help what-so-ever
you don't try to be nice
you started this fight
is there ever such peace
that will end all the might?
you know how to make me laugh
why do you always ruin it for a while
it's always good the first half
then it all goes down hill
you say you don't care
you have a good skill
but you can never repair
all the damage you've done
to my soul and my heart
I thought you were my sun
is there ever a fresh star
to what you've done to me
you've broken me more
will I ever forgive thee
you got me hardcore
what should I do
how are you my friend
when you treat me like poo
is there no end
to how your treating
me I can't take it any more
this is more times then three
I don't like this war
thats happening between us
will it ever stop
it could more or less
be like a soda pop
exploding in our face
more then ever before
will we ever interlace
or just start another war
how long can this go on
I want it to stop
we can't keep expanding upon
this giant fight crop
I want it to end
but will it ever
I want to be friends
but you don't help what-so-ever
you don't try to be nice
you started this fight
is there ever such peace
that will end all the might?



3 Comments
i like it... its sad until i saw poo... i cracked a little but then realized... its true... keep it up kid =3
thx
i liked it mostly cuz its kinda wut im goin through right now