Sacrifice
All rights go to me; and thank you Night-Shade Series for the boost of inspiration (:
Is life.. perfect? Heck no. Is it horrible? Yes. I'm a 15 year old girl, and I am not living the life. Years ago, I was an abused girl. I told everyone, yet they wouldn't believe me, and they were looking at a bloody, scarred girl. Damned parents.
I've never, ever thought Good Life was even a word. How rude of me. I didn't even tell you my name. I'm Abby Dreafer. Where do I live now? No where. I've starved for days. I'm all alone in the woods, creatures lurking about. But I don't count them.
Tonight, I'll be a goner for sure. That's good. I'm starving, and suffering. Pains usually shot up my stomach, and caused aches. I've groaned for days, yet no one has came to save me.
And that's not all. I don't really remember my past.. but I'm certain of most things.
Flashback
"Mommy?" I whispered, peeking through the door.
"Ugh!" she groaned. "Selfish child! What do you want?"
"I.. I wanted to tell you, that I wrote something on the wall! For you!"
She turned around, and flashed her eyes with anger. "Wicked child! Why the hell can't you be more like your brother?" she screamed, walking up to me.
I held onto the rusty, and cotton teddy bear, and screeched. "No Mommy! No! Please! No! Don't!"
My mother, truely, had never cared about me. She told me that she would've suffocated me in the hospital, because when I grew up, she told me.. I was.. ugly. But I still loved her. Till now. Now I want her to go to Hell.
She came over me, and punched me in the eye. 5 times. Blood started rolling down my cheeks, onto my body. I didn't try to move. She'd just punch me more, but I flinched. Soon, I blacked out, losing too much blood.
"I love you, I always did. I don't kn.. kn..ow why your.. treating me like.. th-" were my last words. And the last image, was my mom, crying. She sent me to the orphange, and she sent me a note that she had anger issues with me, and couldn't take care of me. But she didn't say I love you. I escaped, and came here. And here you found me.
But I still hate my Mom. But I don't know where she is now.
I've never, ever thought Good Life was even a word. How rude of me. I didn't even tell you my name. I'm Abby Dreafer. Where do I live now? No where. I've starved for days. I'm all alone in the woods, creatures lurking about. But I don't count them.
Tonight, I'll be a goner for sure. That's good. I'm starving, and suffering. Pains usually shot up my stomach, and caused aches. I've groaned for days, yet no one has came to save me.
And that's not all. I don't really remember my past.. but I'm certain of most things.
Flashback
"Mommy?" I whispered, peeking through the door.
"Ugh!" she groaned. "Selfish child! What do you want?"
"I.. I wanted to tell you, that I wrote something on the wall! For you!"
She turned around, and flashed her eyes with anger. "Wicked child! Why the hell can't you be more like your brother?" she screamed, walking up to me.
I held onto the rusty, and cotton teddy bear, and screeched. "No Mommy! No! Please! No! Don't!"
My mother, truely, had never cared about me. She told me that she would've suffocated me in the hospital, because when I grew up, she told me.. I was.. ugly. But I still loved her. Till now. Now I want her to go to Hell.
She came over me, and punched me in the eye. 5 times. Blood started rolling down my cheeks, onto my body. I didn't try to move. She'd just punch me more, but I flinched. Soon, I blacked out, losing too much blood.
"I love you, I always did. I don't kn.. kn..ow why your.. treating me like.. th-" were my last words. And the last image, was my mom, crying. She sent me to the orphange, and she sent me a note that she had anger issues with me, and couldn't take care of me. But she didn't say I love you. I escaped, and came here. And here you found me.
But I still hate my Mom. But I don't know where she is now.
16 Comments
Aww it's sad :( but it's really good!!
T.T that's so awful what the mom did ... please continue though ^^
wow
Good, but horribly sad! :((
Oh my gosh! Please make more this is amazing! You're a great writer! Seriously!
Ooh! Interesting! Please continue!
oooooooo i smell a wonderfull stiry coming
Really cool idea! Please do continue this!
next pwease
Watches story and waits for more like a hawk