Destroying the Gates of Hell
Hey ppl! This is a story I randomly started to write hope you like.
Chapter 1
Breaking the chains
I am a demon.
I am hunting.
I will find you. And I will take your soul.
Why? I do not know. I remember nothing.
I remember nothing.....except that I am a demon.
I stare up at the black nothingness that is the sky. The chains by which I am bound glow with a firey red. It is all I see. I no longer feel the burning sensation of the chains. My body is numb.
Who am I? What am I? I am lost. Is that true? Where do I belong? All I see is my chains, and all I hear are the pitiful cries of lost and forgotten souls. Souls like me, damned to the darkest pits of Hell. Why is it I can't remember anything?
I'm too tired to fight. I should just give in. I have nothing to live for... and if I do I can't remember. As my body relaxes and waits for eternity to end my mind empties also. Then a single word enters my almost dead mind. This single word gives me reason to fight. Gives me reason to hunt and destroy.
Tyler. That's right, he's the reason I'm here. I gave my soul, my life for him. But all he did was stab me in the back. And my broken, betrayed soul was caste into Hell. All I can do is rot in my sins.
No. That's not true. I can fight. His soul will belong to Hell. Where he will wallow in self-pity. I grab hold of the chains on my left arm with with my right hand. My senses are waking up. I wince at the pain as I pull at them. They do not budge. I try again. A life time passes before they finally crumble. I do the same to the chains on my right hand. I sit there for a moment to make sure my head is clear. My head is throbbing and the pungent smell of death stings my nose.
I get up and stumble along an invisable path, falling many times untill the blood starts circulating in my legs and I can run. After that I keep going, afraid that if I stop I shall be swallowed in chains again. I can see nothing. Not a path nor walls. My hope of breaking free is weakend. It feels like I have been wondering in darkness for ages. I see it! An opening! I run towards the crack in the darkness. I fall into it.
I land on the Devil's castle floor. I run into one of his skeleton guards. He carries a giant axe with blades on both sides of the handle and his soul surrounds him like a sheild. Fear is the first thing to register but then rage and hunger take over. With my mind unable to comprehend my situation, my body acts on its own. I dodge his blows for the most part and manage to take his axe. With one strike I take him down. I eat his soul. It's bitter and full of regret but it satifies me for the time being. This brings the concept to my mind that if I intend to break out of Hell and return to the living world, I'll need to gather souls. I no my soul is weak and cannot sustain itself so I will have to take the souls of others in order to go on.
I move through the castle not sure where I'm going. I looking for a way out but my movements are quick and panicked. I make myself stop so I can figure out a better plan. The castle is big and like a labyrinth. Shadows from dimly lit torches dance on the walls waiting to capture someone and send them into agony. The air is dank and filled with sarrow and hatred. I decide to just fallow a path and hope it leads out. On the way I take down and steal the souls of gaurds or whatever crosses my path. I put the souls in a box I found on one of the gaurds. It's small and fits in the pocket of a black cape I also lifted from a gaurd, but inside it is an infinet amout of space.
I'm not sure how long it took though I'm sure it was several bhours but I made it out of the castel. My consciousness is still blury but I'm one step closer to catching my prey.
I am hunting.
I will find you. And I will take your soul.
Why? I do not know. I remember nothing.
I remember nothing.....except that I am a demon.
I stare up at the black nothingness that is the sky. The chains by which I am bound glow with a firey red. It is all I see. I no longer feel the burning sensation of the chains. My body is numb.
Who am I? What am I? I am lost. Is that true? Where do I belong? All I see is my chains, and all I hear are the pitiful cries of lost and forgotten souls. Souls like me, damned to the darkest pits of Hell. Why is it I can't remember anything?
I'm too tired to fight. I should just give in. I have nothing to live for... and if I do I can't remember. As my body relaxes and waits for eternity to end my mind empties also. Then a single word enters my almost dead mind. This single word gives me reason to fight. Gives me reason to hunt and destroy.
Tyler. That's right, he's the reason I'm here. I gave my soul, my life for him. But all he did was stab me in the back. And my broken, betrayed soul was caste into Hell. All I can do is rot in my sins.
No. That's not true. I can fight. His soul will belong to Hell. Where he will wallow in self-pity. I grab hold of the chains on my left arm with with my right hand. My senses are waking up. I wince at the pain as I pull at them. They do not budge. I try again. A life time passes before they finally crumble. I do the same to the chains on my right hand. I sit there for a moment to make sure my head is clear. My head is throbbing and the pungent smell of death stings my nose.
I get up and stumble along an invisable path, falling many times untill the blood starts circulating in my legs and I can run. After that I keep going, afraid that if I stop I shall be swallowed in chains again. I can see nothing. Not a path nor walls. My hope of breaking free is weakend. It feels like I have been wondering in darkness for ages. I see it! An opening! I run towards the crack in the darkness. I fall into it.
I land on the Devil's castle floor. I run into one of his skeleton guards. He carries a giant axe with blades on both sides of the handle and his soul surrounds him like a sheild. Fear is the first thing to register but then rage and hunger take over. With my mind unable to comprehend my situation, my body acts on its own. I dodge his blows for the most part and manage to take his axe. With one strike I take him down. I eat his soul. It's bitter and full of regret but it satifies me for the time being. This brings the concept to my mind that if I intend to break out of Hell and return to the living world, I'll need to gather souls. I no my soul is weak and cannot sustain itself so I will have to take the souls of others in order to go on.
I move through the castle not sure where I'm going. I looking for a way out but my movements are quick and panicked. I make myself stop so I can figure out a better plan. The castle is big and like a labyrinth. Shadows from dimly lit torches dance on the walls waiting to capture someone and send them into agony. The air is dank and filled with sarrow and hatred. I decide to just fallow a path and hope it leads out. On the way I take down and steal the souls of gaurds or whatever crosses my path. I put the souls in a box I found on one of the gaurds. It's small and fits in the pocket of a black cape I also lifted from a gaurd, but inside it is an infinet amout of space.
I'm not sure how long it took though I'm sure it was several bhours but I made it out of the castel. My consciousness is still blury but I'm one step closer to catching my prey.



10 Comments
I LOVE THOSE KIND OF STORIES WITH DEMONS AND HELL AND STUFF MOOOOAAARRR
awesome i love it but kinda scary thinking of all these dont u think?? yet is cool =)
Yes it is kinda scary but fun.
Is it possible to die (again) if you're already in hell?
N no it is not. You can't die again if you're in Hell only come close or feel like it. And yes I realize that takes away from any suspense that I had but it's not like I expected you to believe she dies this early in the story.
Awesome!!!!!!!!! Love it!!!!
thx glad you like it!
XD THAT WAS GREAT! ^_^
Glad you liked it!! ~^.^~
cool cool cool!!!