Forever and ever.....so we thought(Paul Love story)
Ok. sooo This is my first story.please dont hate. I promise if it sucks I will fix it!! Thanks.
You are Raelynn Jones, your sister is Kelsey Jones. You were born and raised in La Push until your dad decided to move to California. Then, your mom dies and y'all go back home.
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Raelynn Jones
looks: black hair, blue eyes, 16
Kelsey Jones
looks: brown hair, hazel eyes, 15 avout to be 16
Millie Victore
Looks: blond hair, brown eyes, 16
Ginger Wells
looks: red hair, grey eyes, 15
Bridgette Wells
Looks: black hair, grey/green eyes, 16
all other characters are from the twilight movies. Please comment and rate.
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Raelynn Jones
looks: black hair, blue eyes, 16
Kelsey Jones
looks: brown hair, hazel eyes, 15 avout to be 16
Millie Victore
Looks: blond hair, brown eyes, 16
Ginger Wells
looks: red hair, grey eyes, 15
Bridgette Wells
Looks: black hair, grey/green eyes, 16
all other characters are from the twilight movies. Please comment and rate.
2 Comments
Its good for your first story(: I like it. Maybe you should make them longer...alot longer. Only having two paragraphs isnt enough. My keep up the good work(:
Oh and check your spelling. We hate when people type in text.