Dangerous Heartbreak Part 1 (read intro)
So this love story is about a girl who has a great family and has it all. But when one day a mysterious but very attractive man steps into her life she is choosing betrayal to her family or a romance that could never be. Enjoy!
Chapter 1
Part 1
The lights of downtown Tulsa, Oklahoma couldn't shine brighter. You had just left the biggest party of your high school career and now were speeding down 1st Avenue with your best friends Dana,Lindsey, and Corinne. You all were being driven by Dana's dad and were having the time of your lives, with heads popping out of the Black Range Rover's sunroof. You suddenly realized what your parents had so strictly lectured you about that morning. Parents- "Jordin its a privilege we are letting you go to this party tonight. As a young lady we expect you to behave and that means to consume absolutely NO alcohol.. understood? You nodded" OH MY GOD LINDSEY "you whispered to your friend next to you" god Jordin what is your deal? "says Lindsey, curiously" I drank like four beers tonight, I need some gum or something to cover up! "you said, panic rising in your voice" "she laughed" ohh Jordin you are such a good little princess. "She reaches in her purse and pulls out a stick of gum" here you go. "You squeeze her shoulder as if to thank her." Dana's dad pulls up into your 3 story brick house and puts it in park. The girls all blow kisses and say to call one another later. You wave and walk up to your front door. "Your dad opens it" hey sweetie, have a good time? Yes, "you say, brushing past him" you head up to your room an hour later after telling them the details, of course leaving out the drinking part. You check your phone and see a text from a private caller "I can tell you need out, I can fix that" you feel chills up your spine and the sudden feeling someone is watching you.. you shut your curtains and deleted the message.. who was it and why do you get the sense the message is completely true? TO BE CONTINUED



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Ohhhh I hope you continue.!!! This was really good. :]
omg!!!! AMAZING SO FAR! next please!!!