My side seeing of World War two: Will The world ever be at peace?
Young 11 year old Valerie has been stuck hidden under ground with a diary, a pencil and a hope for survivel. She has been devistated by the news of her uncle Terry dying in Japan. But she must follow on she only has a few items of food left and with everyone around her she feels not at all safe. She is a foster child and she trust nobody. But she is done what she is told every minute untill she is told to get above ground and go to another hide out when her mother gets shot...
Chapter 1
The beguining
Its Times you think are these wars going to end is the world ever going to be at peace for once again. I hope it will be soon the world hasn't been at peace since 1918 and its 1940 We are in the middle of World War two. Yes my it was just announced to my family a week ago that my uncle Terry had died fighting in Japan. Me I'm a 11 year old girl from the U.K. My name is Valerie. I am a foster child but the truth is that everyone around me I can't trust since my old mom and dad gave me up I can only think that they are the only ones to trust forever.
I am 15 feet below the grounds of France We have oxygen down here but soon we will run out and have to find a new spot to take cover. My foster dad Joch is in the war right now. My foster mom is watch my little sister Clara as me being the oldest I am getting yelled at by her even when our life's are at stake. If the other people of the war find where we are hiding we will be killed.
I have been down here now for 5 months we have been getting to diffrent places one step at a time. How I got down here was not a long story. I had kissed my foster dad good bye. I started to pack up my clothes just in case we would have to move to America again to be safe. But a year after dad set off to Brazil The general from the France army kicked down our door and told us to get our stuff we needed to get under ground or we could perish. We had moved as quick as possibal but it wasn't fast enough the war had already come to France and we couldn't make it to the site we were suppost to be in. We had to start digging to get to the site. But on our way we had found another group of scared defenceless french people taking cover so we stayed there for the night then started our recrute again. It wasn't long before I heard almost as 50 thousand gun shots and and yelling "GET TO THE BASE, GET TO THE BASE!" I heard a soldier from America yell. I respected America because they took us in for shelter in WWI. Well I was not born yet but they took my mother in. My foster mother on the other side is rascist to other nations. She at first did not want Dad to leave to fight other nations because she had no trust in the other troops. But Dad yelled at her and almost had a divorce he said 'Its either me to get shot or our whole country to get shot. If you don't want me to take one for France we should get a divorce! Be glad I am trying to save your life!" I hadn't been born yet but he left for WWI. But I still think to myself, Will the world ever be at peace?
I am 15 feet below the grounds of France We have oxygen down here but soon we will run out and have to find a new spot to take cover. My foster dad Joch is in the war right now. My foster mom is watch my little sister Clara as me being the oldest I am getting yelled at by her even when our life's are at stake. If the other people of the war find where we are hiding we will be killed.
I have been down here now for 5 months we have been getting to diffrent places one step at a time. How I got down here was not a long story. I had kissed my foster dad good bye. I started to pack up my clothes just in case we would have to move to America again to be safe. But a year after dad set off to Brazil The general from the France army kicked down our door and told us to get our stuff we needed to get under ground or we could perish. We had moved as quick as possibal but it wasn't fast enough the war had already come to France and we couldn't make it to the site we were suppost to be in. We had to start digging to get to the site. But on our way we had found another group of scared defenceless french people taking cover so we stayed there for the night then started our recrute again. It wasn't long before I heard almost as 50 thousand gun shots and and yelling "GET TO THE BASE, GET TO THE BASE!" I heard a soldier from America yell. I respected America because they took us in for shelter in WWI. Well I was not born yet but they took my mother in. My foster mother on the other side is rascist to other nations. She at first did not want Dad to leave to fight other nations because she had no trust in the other troops. But Dad yelled at her and almost had a divorce he said 'Its either me to get shot or our whole country to get shot. If you don't want me to take one for France we should get a divorce! Be glad I am trying to save your life!" I hadn't been born yet but he left for WWI. But I still think to myself, Will the world ever be at peace?



3 Comments
That's really good!
that's really good! ^.^ awsomeness!
love it!! its really realistic :)