A Poem
You knew I was difficult,
I made that clear.
You made your choice,
I made mine without fear.
Now I'm broken-hearted
While you walk free.
The fighting's started.
And why can't you see?
You were my world,
The inspiration in my words.
Now, the pain is unfurled
As I strike the chords.
Love with you isn't good
Not for me, at least.
If I could change it, I would,
Just to get it off my breast.
I made that clear.
You made your choice,
I made mine without fear.
Now I'm broken-hearted
While you walk free.
The fighting's started.
And why can't you see?
You were my world,
The inspiration in my words.
Now, the pain is unfurled
As I strike the chords.
Love with you isn't good
Not for me, at least.
If I could change it, I would,
Just to get it off my breast.
19 Comments
That was really good... Wow...
Awesome job Potions, as always :)
beautiful poem :) please keep up the writing!
Beautiful. :) Really deep to.
This poem is truly amazing. Well- enjoyed( " Two thumbs up ")!
Really REALLY goood :D!!!!
just what i am feeling right now :'\
Aww... I'm sorry that you're feeling down. :(
Nice :)
But kinda depressing...
I don't care much for it...sorry...Even though I've had feelings like that before, it just doesn't--hmm, how do I put this into words??? >:\
Sorry you don't like it, Gwiazdy... :/
I really love it!!!
It sort of describes what I'm feeling XD