who would fall for you part 16

who would fall for you part 16

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So we left off when u were taking the tour with Ray,when Ray open a door at the end off the hallway.Whats in there? A DEAD BODY? A GIAND SPIDER? Find out!
Sorry it took so long it wont happent again coz finally...School is OVER YAY!!!
Hope u like guys!I love u all so much!

~Cristi~

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    When Ray opens the door u see a very messy living room.But is it?There so many things,books,papers,fotos or paintings & other things all over the floor,the couches..WOW,u say entering carefully not 2

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    I guess its gonna b difficult 2 say who is it right?Ray asks coming in 2 kicking somethings carefully out of the way.No!its Ians i know it,urs is not like that,or Evans,u say.U go over 2 the little

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    U bent down & pick up some papers & pics.Some of the papers say things in a language uve never see b4.It dosent even look like a language just symbols.U look at the pics,some ript apart,burned,cut.

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    1 though untouched.It was a pic of a beautiful couple,smiling wide looking at a baby in a blancet.Who is that couple,u think.Probaply Ians parents & the baby must b him.U bent again & place them down.

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    Exept that pic,when u stand up u hit on someone right behind u,& so close.U turn around really fast with ur hands 2 the air & see Ray.He graps ur hand & holds u.He was looking right into ur eyes,with

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    I guess its gonna b difficult 2 say who is it right?Ray asks coming in 2 kicking somethings carefully out of the way.No!its Ians i know it,urs is not like that,or Evans,u say.U go over 2 the little

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    U bent down & pick up some papers & pics.Some of the papers say things in a language uve never see b4.It dosent even look like a language just symbols.U look at the pics,some ript apart,burned,cut.

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    1 though untouched.It was a pic of a beautiful couple,smiling wide looking at a baby in a blancet.Who is that couple,u think.Probaply Ians parents & the baby must b him.U bent again & place them down.

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    Exept that pic,when u stand up u hit on someone right behind u,& so close.U turn around really fast with ur hands 2 the air & see Ray.He graps ur hand & holds u.He was looking right into ur eyes,with

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    U were staring starlet & the laughed,u tried 2 pull away but he wouldnt let go.Ray,u said.He didnt say anything,he moved ur hair from ur face.Ur so beautiful..(_),he said.U were looking at him.

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    U notice that he was wearing a hat again.He kept stroking ur face.U tried 2 take it off but he pulled a bit.Why?u said.I-it was obvious he didnt know what 2 say.U pulled it off.

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    His cat ears fell,u giggled,he blushed.U touched one & the both twist a bit.U laughed.He placed his arms around u pulling u closer.I want 2 do something,he said & kiised u sweetly.When he puled away u

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    He wasent the same,he was more confident.U were looking each other.Sorry,he said & let go when he saw the pic in ur hand.Whats that?he asked.U gave him the foto.Ohh,he said.Is that Ians parents & is

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    It took him a while 2 anwser.No,ill tell ya later,he said,he put the pic in his pocket & took ur hand leading u out.U were curious why did he took it & who were these people.U walked up stairs.

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    He showed u Evans living room,with paintings related 2 nature and stuff.His living room with books & paintings,his the one who makes them actually & his very good.He showed u even the emty rooms so

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    u can choose one 2 be yours.Then u walked in a room with many electronic stuff,games & books..like a game room.All the boys were in there.Evan was playing with Nate a game with cars,races & Ian with

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    Go sit with the guys a while kk?Ray said.Ok,u replied.U walked & sat between of them.Whos winning?I AM!Evan shouted.No ur..NOT!Nate said & got infront of Evans car.U saw Ray giving the foto 2 Ian.

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    He seemed shocked but then warmly smiled & looked at Jonah.He did the same & whispered something.Ian & Ray nod.Evan & Nate must heard coz they paused the game & looked at them.Then at smiling the same

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    Ian walked close 2 u giving u the foto.Ray & jonah folowed.U like it?Ian asked.Yeah r they ur parents?u said.He seemed disapointed.No,take it,he said.Why?These r ur parents (_),& this is u,he said

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    What?u said.U were about 2 cry.U couldnt talk,u were shocked,u didnt recognize them.U got up & sat 2 the table looking at the picture.Ur ok?Jonah said coming nxt 2u.U start crying like h3ll.Dont (_)

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    He left.U cried ur self 2 sleep still siting 2 the table holding the picture tight close 2 ur face.

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    So i hope u liked it,i tried make it sooner but something wont let me,thanks 4 taking it,rate,comment,fave etc BYE guys!

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