POEM :D
This poem was actually inspired by the name of an album by my favourite band :) Its called Venus Doom. It just got me thinking, so I decided to write a poem from it :) This is basically what I think Venus Doom means (when you read it, keep in mind that Venus is supposed to be where women are from, and so women are Venus in a way :) so ENJOY :) I hope you like it, and feel free to comment :) I'll happily take advice :)
I am no saint
You know this is true
I'll watch you burn
I'll rip you in two.
Your love is like poison
It's a painful delight
I will watch you die
I'll kill you at night.
I cause you to suffer
Your dead love won't bloom
You love me and hate me
I am Venus Doom.
My love is like daggers
My heart is like stone
You are caught in my web
Be forever alone.
Your pain is like pleasure
I smile from strong joy
Watching you struggle
Your heart is my toy.
You forever will love me
Like locked in a tomb
I will love you and kill you
I am Venus Doom.
You know this is true
I'll watch you burn
I'll rip you in two.
Your love is like poison
It's a painful delight
I will watch you die
I'll kill you at night.
I cause you to suffer
Your dead love won't bloom
You love me and hate me
I am Venus Doom.
My love is like daggers
My heart is like stone
You are caught in my web
Be forever alone.
Your pain is like pleasure
I smile from strong joy
Watching you struggle
Your heart is my toy.
You forever will love me
Like locked in a tomb
I will love you and kill you
I am Venus Doom.
10 Comments
Whoa, that was really good! It was so powerful, so meaningful...I definitely think you found your inspiration when writing poems :) It was amazing, 5 stars hands-down!
I agree :)
why are you so good at writing poems? -.-
awesome :]
woooooah, this is kool :3
OMFG H.I.M. inspired u for this?? is awesome
this is sooooo gooood!! :D :D
you're amazing at writing poems! :D
Wow. It's amazing. XD
i loved it
Wow that was amazing!!!! It held so much power and it was sooooo interesting!!!! Great job!!! Keep writing you have a truly great talent!!!! *