A Slave of Love
Who would've known i'd be taken, & never be returned so that i could be used.
Chapter 1
Taken
School was a terrible day. T was ignoring me, the teacher was yelling at me. Uhh, & i had to walk home !Jesse(me) was walking down the street when all of sudden a van pulled up, it was T. "Hey!"i said. "Get in the van.', he said. "Ok wht wrong wit yhu?!", i said. I sat on the couch that was placed in the corner of the room. "Get on the couch!" he screamed. "Ok." Why was he being so rude? "Now Bequiet!"



7 Comments
You should definitely make this longer! You have an inviting title, so I think you should just make this longer versus short and to the point (:
More please :)
i really like it
Could u riite more plz
itz gd!!
Waaayy to shore
***short
More more please