I love you more
"HI! everyone I have deicided to make a story were I left off on "I love you". I got 6! comments on my last story. I was so happy! that people wrote how much they loved my story. I even got this muffin shaped like a star! from foolish star! thank you so much!" Anyway here's a anopther part from I love you. Called I love you more. I hope you enjoy and post your comments! I would really love for you to say what you say about this"
-Melissa's p.o.v.-
I gave my rose to my mom as part of the ceremony. She almost cried. Well the gradution is over and now! I'm officaly going to high school! I'm officaly in grade nine. Daniel was smiling threw the whole time at me. I was trying not to blush from it...well at least not that much. I just can't believe were a couple, now! And I'm really happy about that too! After the ceremony my mom took me to a friend of stupid! nathan's house for his party! his mom was on the school's council. So it's at his house, and after month's of telling my mom to go that party she finally said yes. But I have to be home by 10! sharp! or she was going to hunt me down and ground me! I was going with Daniel's mom in his car. My mom had to go to a meeting, after my gradution, she didn't want to work on my gradution, but I said it was okay. She hugged me and then drove off with my sister who said as she whispered in my ear. "In case you and your boyfriend have a little to much fun." She gave me something that was in her hand and put it in my purse. Then she was in my mom's car. I opened my purse and look to see what was in there and I searched threw it and I saw...with shock and embrassment, picked it up with my hands and say in a tiny whisper.
"A condum? -.-"
Really?!? Claudia!!! I'm going to kill you!! I don't even wnat to know where she got this! Only my sister will give me a condum! On my gradution day......as a joke....I hope.
"Hey Melissa!" My friends say, as they are running to me. I stuff the thing in my purse and pretend it never happened and turn to my friends.
"Hey! Mandy, komet, mystery!"
"I'm offically a grade niner!" Mandy said happily.
"Yeah! I'm so happy" Komet said.
"Are you going to Nathan's party?" Mystery said.
"I nodded Yeah my mom finally said yes"
"Really?" Mandy said.
"Where's your mom?" komet said.
"Oh! she had to go to a meeting."
"So who is driving you?" Mystery said.
"My friend Daniel's mom."
"OOOHHHHHH!?!?" They all said with smiles and grins on there faces.
"What?" I said.
"Your boyfriend's mom is driving with you to the party?" Mystery said.
"yeah?" I said.
"Is that a probelm?"
"YEAH!" They all say.
"Well I didn't think it was much of a big deal." I said.
HONK
"That must be her." I said running to the car of my boyfriend!
Me and Daniel get out of the car, with both silent and embrassing looks on both of our faces. Daniel's mom goes out of the car and locks it leaving a beep.
"Where are you going?" Daniel said to his mom, walking to the sidewalk. I have a few errands to run. I'll be back in a few. Oh. Here daniel." She threws something to him.
It's the car keys.
"Why are you giving me these for?" He said as he puts them in his pants pockets.
"I want too."
"Anyway call me when you get tried." She walks away from us.Then I look at the house and see Nathan and his girlfriend there with is arm around her. I turn away and feel like crying, like at that school fair. Then Daniel looks at me like that. and says.
"Are you okay Melissa? If you feel sick or anything we can go home...If you want?"
"NO!" I said.
I turn to him with my face and said.
"I came here to have fun not to be sad." I said wipping away my tears.
"Now let's go." We both go into the party like a real couple. I see loud drake music a DJ, punch, food, and a disco ball that mad the room in colors and flashes of red, gree, and blue. There was a lot of people dancing. The house was full of all of the grade 8's from boy to girl. Daniel looks at me and says.
"Ready to dance?" He says.
Then Nathan bums into me with his girlfriend and looks right at me. He smiles and walks with her girlfriend to the dance floor. I feel like crying I want to go home so badly! And I also feel like I want to hurt him as much as he hurt me! Then I turn to Daniel and he just stares at him, very evily. Then I said.
"Yes I will love to dance with you!" I grab Daniel's wrist and we start to dance to all of the fast songs.
-Daniel's p.o.v.-
Why was Melissa looking at that guy?! He hurts her, picks on her, and says nothing but bad stuff to her! ALL THE TIME!! I should be the one to have Melissa's HEART! NOT THIS GUY! Wait don't tell me....that Melissa loved this guy! Oh frig! IT's true. When she was at the school fair she was looking at Nathan the whole time and when she was going to tell him how she really felt about him she had a girlfriend! ALL THE TIME!! and she didn't even notice! That guy!........THAT GUY!!!! ahould really be punched in the face..wait..that sounds to easy SUCKER PUNCHED IN THE FACE!! and it should be by me! I kept looking at him and he turned from his girlfriend and was looking at Melissa dance. He kept staring at her for like 5 mintunes! That, THAT BEEP!! I walk to Melissa and put my arms around her hips. Then she looks at my hands that were there and then just smiles at me. I smile back and look at Nathan! Which really looked mad at me! HE sould be! then he turns and starts to dance with his girlfriend again.
-Melissa's p.o.v.-
I walk to the punch bowl and I was all aweaty and tired I look at my cell phone to see that. It was only 9! :15! I go to the punch bowl and get a red cup and take a sip. It tasted really funny.
-Daniel's p.o.v.-
I keeped waiting at the endge of the wall for her and see that Nathan walks up to me and says.
"How did you get her?"
"Get who?"
"You know, who." He syas as I smirks and puts his hands in his pockets.
"Melissa!"
"What about her?" I said getting a bad feeling from the pit of my stomach.
"I heard yo guys..almost....had..well you know.... with her." He said.
My face was completey flushed and I looked down.
"Did you?" he asked.
"No!" I said.
"Really? because I was wondering if I could take her off your hands for you."
"What do you mean by that?" I said not leaning againest that wall anymore. I also had both of my hands in fists ready to punch him.
"Like for...about one night."
WHAT?!?!?!? This evil son of a BEEP
"YOU ARE NOT GOING TO DO THAT TO MELISSA!! SHE DESERVES BETTER THEN YOU!" I said to him.
"THERE ARE PEOPLE WHO ARE JUST LIKE YOU AND THEY END UP DYING ALONE!" I said to him.
"Really?" He said to me.
"Becuase eirther way She is coming home with me." This no good rotting dirty guy! I outta!
"What do you mean?"
"You see that punch bowl over there."
I look at the bowl.
"Yeah so what?!"
"It's been full of liquor"
"What?!"
I see Melissa drinking cup after cup.
"OH GOD!!! MELISSA!" I run to her. I move pass the crowd.
-Melissa's p.o.v.-
It also had a weird after taste too! I was so thristy that I drinked about three more cups of it! Then Daniel was running in front of me with puffs of hair.
"Hi! daniel" I said in a drunken girl's voice.
"Are you drunk?"
"I only had these punch bowl drinks." I said in the same drunken girl's voice. With a big grin on my face.
I poured another one and was about to drink it when he pulled it away from my hands and made me drop it. I look at the drink. Then saw.
"What's the madtta with ya!"
"Those drinks are filled with alcohol!" He said to me.
"Vhat?"
"Nathan put then in the punch!"
"VHAT?!" I look at Nathan with his hand around his girlfriends hips and are walking to a room. Then I said.
"No.."
"What?" Daniel says.
"NO!" I get a weird feeling in the pit of my stomach. Then I cover my mouth, and get a strong feeling too. I run to the front lawn, and covered my mouth all the way there.
-Daniel's p.o.v.-
That GUY!!!! made her so drunk that she is now puking her guts out! I walk to where Nathan is to give him a piece of my mind. Then I look at the dance floor, and see a bunch of girls and guys there but no Nathan! Then I see a bunch of people near a room. Then I ask.
"What's going on?"
Then one of Melissa's friends says.
"Nathan just took his girlfriend in that room!"
"WHAT?!"
I said.
"Please don't tell Melissa! It would break her heart." komet said.
"What?"
"You don't know?" Mystery said
"she was really in loved with that guy." Mandy said turning and covering her mouth, as she looked at me.
"She was in love with him?"
-Melissa's p.o.v.-
BLAHHH! BLAH!!!!
BLAH!!!!!
I think I'm done. Wait...maybe not.
BLLLLAAAAAAAHHHHHH!!!!!
I start to cough. Then I wipe the last piece of vomit off of my mouth. I look for my purse for a peice of minted gum. Loucky for me I had a pack of it. So I put about 5 packs of gum in my mouth to get rid of the taste of barf in my mouth. Then I walk into the party to find Daniel and call his mom to take me home. I walk into the house and less people were at the dance floor? Then I see a crowd of people in a room. I can hear whispering. About Nathan and his girlfriend in that same room? NO!! NO!! It can't be. I look to find daniel. I try to hold back the tears in my eyes but I couldn't. There just kept coming out of my eyes! I look down to make sure no one sees me and Then I feel someone pulling my wrist and see that there Daniel. He says.
"Melissa you want to go home?"
"yeah." I said walking out of that house and near the car.
"Melissa are you okay?"
"No.. not really" I said lifting my face, which showed all of the tears falling and coming out of my eyes.
"Melissa?"
"I'm sorry but...I think I still love him."
He just looks at me.
He puts his hand on my head which is very warm and making me cry a little less.
"It's getting cold. We should get in the car."
"Sure." I said as we both get into the car. The car warms me up a little bit. IT's just me and him in a silent room, in a car. Then I rememder how Nathan ways of making me fall for him. Then I look at Daneil he's way better then that Nathan will ever be. He's kind, sweet, funny, and I can be myself when I'm around him! Something that Nathan never is! Then I rememdered that one scene where he was taking he's girlfriend into that room of the house. I want to get back at him. So I unzip my dress. Daniel can here the sound and he turns around. Then he looks at my dress falling down to the car seat. Then he looks at me with blush all over his face. Then says.
"w-what are you doing?" He says.
Then I crawl to him, I kick my dress off of the seat. It's just me, in a bra, underwear and high heels. Then I said.
"I want.. you to show me how much you love me."
"What?"
"I'm asking you.....too....make me yours!" I said.
-Daniel's p.o.v.-
I think I'm going to have a nose bleed from this! 0///////////////////0 Is she seriuos? Do I do it? What about, what happened last time. Is she really...do I really want to do this? OF courase I DO! But does she?
"m-melissa" I said pulling her away from me.
"Are you sure?" I said.
She looks at me with those big brown eyes.
"yes! I'm sure." She says.
"What about last time?"
"I don't care about last time. Just promise me you wouldn't go over board. okay?"
Then she starts to crawl to me again and this time it's so close that I could feel her breathe. Then I said.
"Melissa!" I said pulling her back by the shoulders again.
"You know......" I said breathing very hard.
"If I do this... I'll never stop."
"I'm not planing to stop." She said.
"Are..are..you sure?" I said, for the last time.
"Yes." Then she kisses me. I kiss her back. Then before you can say it! We are both making out! Just like last time. I can hear rain and then it began to rain harder and harder. Then I can hear lighting. Then I take off my shirt and coat..........I take off everything from the top. I don't want to take off the pants though. Then I can hear lighting coming down! harder and harder! Then I lost my sense of common sense I take off my pants and...everything.. Then Melissa still had her shoes on. Then I said. As I let go to breathe.
"You......you gotta take something off." I said, still puffing for air.
-Melissa's p.o.v.-
"What?" I said.
"Take it off."
"What off?" I think I got the idea, of what he wanted me to take off. Then I said.
"Are you sure?" I said.
"Yeah." He said smiling.
"But....but..." I tried to grab my dress, but I couldn't find it.
"Melissa relax." You don't have to if you don't want to." I look down. I want to show how much I love him even of it means him lauging at me.
"It's not a big-"
"I'll do it!"
"What?" He looks at me.
"I'll take it off." I said blushing a little.
"But you got to promise me one thing!"
"What is it?"
"You will not laugh! At me! okay?" I said looking up at him.
"Why would I laugh?" He said.
"Because...becuase...becuase..mine are just......"
"Just?" He said.
"Just?...um...how do I say this....just"
"Um...are you going to say it or not?" He said.
"Alright! Alright! MINE ARE JUST TOO SMALL OKAY!!!" ligihting strike I said it, must boys like ones that are big, not small! Now I don't think he will want to do this anymore! Good bye boyfriend!
"You probaly don't like me anymore...right?" I said looking at him.
Then he crawls to me and says.
"I don't care about size........all I care about is you!"
I think I'm melting.
"I don't care about the size....not one bit......and I will not try to laugh at you...okay?" He said.
I just look at him with a smile and say.
"Are you sure you will not laugh?" I said.
"I'm 100% sure." He said with a smile.
"o-okay" I unhooked it. Then I tossed it, right on top of the dress. He just stares at me......he's just looking at me....and my chest I have my arms to cover them.....then I start think I want to show him how much I love him I took my arms away from my chest.........Then he looks at me....... With blush all over his face. He doesn't notice my face at all. He just stares. Then he grins turns his head and cracks a little laugh.
"See I knew you would laugh." I try to get back, but I couldn't.
"Oh man! where is the thing." Then he grabs my hands and pulls my down to the floor. Then he looks at me with those brown bangs hitting my face. Then he says.
"I don't think there......small." He says smiling....with a look that almost made me blush.
"Then what do you think?" I said. Turning my head.
"I think there......" He's touching them, with his hands...he's also digging his fingers into them...... My face blushes and I close my eyes. I think I want this anymore!
"Beautiful." He kisses me.
"just like you." He kisses and starts to make out with me. Then he says. "I love you..." He starts to kiss me neck.
" I love you" He says again.
"I love you..with all of my heart..." Then he kissing me all over me...I close my eyes and blush harder and harder the lower he gets.Then I said as I'm now on top of him.
"I love you too." I put him hear my body so hard.
-Daniel's p.o.v.-
I'm blushing so hard I can feel them...there warm..... and also really soft. Then I let go of her. Then I go ontop of her again and say. "I...." I kiss her on her chin.
"I" I kiss her on the mouth.
Then I kiss her chest.
"I love you."
I think I can here her groan.
-Melissa's p.o.v.-
I he's...he's kissing them....both of them.....right on the dot....He's kissing them harder. I can...feel him...biting them
"Ow!" I said..
He looks at me with at my face and sees me in pain.
He looks at me with those big brown eyes.
"Sorry..maybe...this will help." He goes down to my chest again and licks them...his..tongue is....so........wet...then it happened!
"groan! 0//////0" I look at him he looks at me....pulls me off of the car floor, and he just blushes at me. What do I do KNOW!!!
I gave my rose to my mom as part of the ceremony. She almost cried. Well the gradution is over and now! I'm officaly going to high school! I'm officaly in grade nine. Daniel was smiling threw the whole time at me. I was trying not to blush from it...well at least not that much. I just can't believe were a couple, now! And I'm really happy about that too! After the ceremony my mom took me to a friend of stupid! nathan's house for his party! his mom was on the school's council. So it's at his house, and after month's of telling my mom to go that party she finally said yes. But I have to be home by 10! sharp! or she was going to hunt me down and ground me! I was going with Daniel's mom in his car. My mom had to go to a meeting, after my gradution, she didn't want to work on my gradution, but I said it was okay. She hugged me and then drove off with my sister who said as she whispered in my ear. "In case you and your boyfriend have a little to much fun." She gave me something that was in her hand and put it in my purse. Then she was in my mom's car. I opened my purse and look to see what was in there and I searched threw it and I saw...with shock and embrassment, picked it up with my hands and say in a tiny whisper.
"A condum? -.-"
Really?!? Claudia!!! I'm going to kill you!! I don't even wnat to know where she got this! Only my sister will give me a condum! On my gradution day......as a joke....I hope.
"Hey Melissa!" My friends say, as they are running to me. I stuff the thing in my purse and pretend it never happened and turn to my friends.
"Hey! Mandy, komet, mystery!"
"I'm offically a grade niner!" Mandy said happily.
"Yeah! I'm so happy" Komet said.
"Are you going to Nathan's party?" Mystery said.
"I nodded Yeah my mom finally said yes"
"Really?" Mandy said.
"Where's your mom?" komet said.
"Oh! she had to go to a meeting."
"So who is driving you?" Mystery said.
"My friend Daniel's mom."
"OOOHHHHHH!?!?" They all said with smiles and grins on there faces.
"What?" I said.
"Your boyfriend's mom is driving with you to the party?" Mystery said.
"yeah?" I said.
"Is that a probelm?"
"YEAH!" They all say.
"Well I didn't think it was much of a big deal." I said.
HONK
"That must be her." I said running to the car of my boyfriend!
Me and Daniel get out of the car, with both silent and embrassing looks on both of our faces. Daniel's mom goes out of the car and locks it leaving a beep.
"Where are you going?" Daniel said to his mom, walking to the sidewalk. I have a few errands to run. I'll be back in a few. Oh. Here daniel." She threws something to him.
It's the car keys.
"Why are you giving me these for?" He said as he puts them in his pants pockets.
"I want too."
"Anyway call me when you get tried." She walks away from us.Then I look at the house and see Nathan and his girlfriend there with is arm around her. I turn away and feel like crying, like at that school fair. Then Daniel looks at me like that. and says.
"Are you okay Melissa? If you feel sick or anything we can go home...If you want?"
"NO!" I said.
I turn to him with my face and said.
"I came here to have fun not to be sad." I said wipping away my tears.
"Now let's go." We both go into the party like a real couple. I see loud drake music a DJ, punch, food, and a disco ball that mad the room in colors and flashes of red, gree, and blue. There was a lot of people dancing. The house was full of all of the grade 8's from boy to girl. Daniel looks at me and says.
"Ready to dance?" He says.
Then Nathan bums into me with his girlfriend and looks right at me. He smiles and walks with her girlfriend to the dance floor. I feel like crying I want to go home so badly! And I also feel like I want to hurt him as much as he hurt me! Then I turn to Daniel and he just stares at him, very evily. Then I said.
"Yes I will love to dance with you!" I grab Daniel's wrist and we start to dance to all of the fast songs.
-Daniel's p.o.v.-
Why was Melissa looking at that guy?! He hurts her, picks on her, and says nothing but bad stuff to her! ALL THE TIME!! I should be the one to have Melissa's HEART! NOT THIS GUY! Wait don't tell me....that Melissa loved this guy! Oh frig! IT's true. When she was at the school fair she was looking at Nathan the whole time and when she was going to tell him how she really felt about him she had a girlfriend! ALL THE TIME!! and she didn't even notice! That guy!........THAT GUY!!!! ahould really be punched in the face..wait..that sounds to easy SUCKER PUNCHED IN THE FACE!! and it should be by me! I kept looking at him and he turned from his girlfriend and was looking at Melissa dance. He kept staring at her for like 5 mintunes! That, THAT BEEP!! I walk to Melissa and put my arms around her hips. Then she looks at my hands that were there and then just smiles at me. I smile back and look at Nathan! Which really looked mad at me! HE sould be! then he turns and starts to dance with his girlfriend again.
-Melissa's p.o.v.-
I walk to the punch bowl and I was all aweaty and tired I look at my cell phone to see that. It was only 9! :15! I go to the punch bowl and get a red cup and take a sip. It tasted really funny.
-Daniel's p.o.v.-
I keeped waiting at the endge of the wall for her and see that Nathan walks up to me and says.
"How did you get her?"
"Get who?"
"You know, who." He syas as I smirks and puts his hands in his pockets.
"Melissa!"
"What about her?" I said getting a bad feeling from the pit of my stomach.
"I heard yo guys..almost....had..well you know.... with her." He said.
My face was completey flushed and I looked down.
"Did you?" he asked.
"No!" I said.
"Really? because I was wondering if I could take her off your hands for you."
"What do you mean by that?" I said not leaning againest that wall anymore. I also had both of my hands in fists ready to punch him.
"Like for...about one night."
WHAT?!?!?!? This evil son of a BEEP
"YOU ARE NOT GOING TO DO THAT TO MELISSA!! SHE DESERVES BETTER THEN YOU!" I said to him.
"THERE ARE PEOPLE WHO ARE JUST LIKE YOU AND THEY END UP DYING ALONE!" I said to him.
"Really?" He said to me.
"Becuase eirther way She is coming home with me." This no good rotting dirty guy! I outta!
"What do you mean?"
"You see that punch bowl over there."
I look at the bowl.
"Yeah so what?!"
"It's been full of liquor"
"What?!"
I see Melissa drinking cup after cup.
"OH GOD!!! MELISSA!" I run to her. I move pass the crowd.
-Melissa's p.o.v.-
It also had a weird after taste too! I was so thristy that I drinked about three more cups of it! Then Daniel was running in front of me with puffs of hair.
"Hi! daniel" I said in a drunken girl's voice.
"Are you drunk?"
"I only had these punch bowl drinks." I said in the same drunken girl's voice. With a big grin on my face.
I poured another one and was about to drink it when he pulled it away from my hands and made me drop it. I look at the drink. Then saw.
"What's the madtta with ya!"
"Those drinks are filled with alcohol!" He said to me.
"Vhat?"
"Nathan put then in the punch!"
"VHAT?!" I look at Nathan with his hand around his girlfriends hips and are walking to a room. Then I said.
"No.."
"What?" Daniel says.
"NO!" I get a weird feeling in the pit of my stomach. Then I cover my mouth, and get a strong feeling too. I run to the front lawn, and covered my mouth all the way there.
-Daniel's p.o.v.-
That GUY!!!! made her so drunk that she is now puking her guts out! I walk to where Nathan is to give him a piece of my mind. Then I look at the dance floor, and see a bunch of girls and guys there but no Nathan! Then I see a bunch of people near a room. Then I ask.
"What's going on?"
Then one of Melissa's friends says.
"Nathan just took his girlfriend in that room!"
"WHAT?!"
I said.
"Please don't tell Melissa! It would break her heart." komet said.
"What?"
"You don't know?" Mystery said
"she was really in loved with that guy." Mandy said turning and covering her mouth, as she looked at me.
"She was in love with him?"
-Melissa's p.o.v.-
BLAHHH! BLAH!!!!
BLAH!!!!!
I think I'm done. Wait...maybe not.
BLLLLAAAAAAAHHHHHH!!!!!
I start to cough. Then I wipe the last piece of vomit off of my mouth. I look for my purse for a peice of minted gum. Loucky for me I had a pack of it. So I put about 5 packs of gum in my mouth to get rid of the taste of barf in my mouth. Then I walk into the party to find Daniel and call his mom to take me home. I walk into the house and less people were at the dance floor? Then I see a crowd of people in a room. I can hear whispering. About Nathan and his girlfriend in that same room? NO!! NO!! It can't be. I look to find daniel. I try to hold back the tears in my eyes but I couldn't. There just kept coming out of my eyes! I look down to make sure no one sees me and Then I feel someone pulling my wrist and see that there Daniel. He says.
"Melissa you want to go home?"
"yeah." I said walking out of that house and near the car.
"Melissa are you okay?"
"No.. not really" I said lifting my face, which showed all of the tears falling and coming out of my eyes.
"Melissa?"
"I'm sorry but...I think I still love him."
He just looks at me.
He puts his hand on my head which is very warm and making me cry a little less.
"It's getting cold. We should get in the car."
"Sure." I said as we both get into the car. The car warms me up a little bit. IT's just me and him in a silent room, in a car. Then I rememder how Nathan ways of making me fall for him. Then I look at Daneil he's way better then that Nathan will ever be. He's kind, sweet, funny, and I can be myself when I'm around him! Something that Nathan never is! Then I rememdered that one scene where he was taking he's girlfriend into that room of the house. I want to get back at him. So I unzip my dress. Daniel can here the sound and he turns around. Then he looks at my dress falling down to the car seat. Then he looks at me with blush all over his face. Then says.
"w-what are you doing?" He says.
Then I crawl to him, I kick my dress off of the seat. It's just me, in a bra, underwear and high heels. Then I said.
"I want.. you to show me how much you love me."
"What?"
"I'm asking you.....too....make me yours!" I said.
-Daniel's p.o.v.-
I think I'm going to have a nose bleed from this! 0///////////////////0 Is she seriuos? Do I do it? What about, what happened last time. Is she really...do I really want to do this? OF courase I DO! But does she?
"m-melissa" I said pulling her away from me.
"Are you sure?" I said.
She looks at me with those big brown eyes.
"yes! I'm sure." She says.
"What about last time?"
"I don't care about last time. Just promise me you wouldn't go over board. okay?"
Then she starts to crawl to me again and this time it's so close that I could feel her breathe. Then I said.
"Melissa!" I said pulling her back by the shoulders again.
"You know......" I said breathing very hard.
"If I do this... I'll never stop."
"I'm not planing to stop." She said.
"Are..are..you sure?" I said, for the last time.
"Yes." Then she kisses me. I kiss her back. Then before you can say it! We are both making out! Just like last time. I can hear rain and then it began to rain harder and harder. Then I can hear lighting. Then I take off my shirt and coat..........I take off everything from the top. I don't want to take off the pants though. Then I can hear lighting coming down! harder and harder! Then I lost my sense of common sense I take off my pants and...everything.. Then Melissa still had her shoes on. Then I said. As I let go to breathe.
"You......you gotta take something off." I said, still puffing for air.
-Melissa's p.o.v.-
"What?" I said.
"Take it off."
"What off?" I think I got the idea, of what he wanted me to take off. Then I said.
"Are you sure?" I said.
"Yeah." He said smiling.
"But....but..." I tried to grab my dress, but I couldn't find it.
"Melissa relax." You don't have to if you don't want to." I look down. I want to show how much I love him even of it means him lauging at me.
"It's not a big-"
"I'll do it!"
"What?" He looks at me.
"I'll take it off." I said blushing a little.
"But you got to promise me one thing!"
"What is it?"
"You will not laugh! At me! okay?" I said looking up at him.
"Why would I laugh?" He said.
"Because...becuase...becuase..mine are just......"
"Just?" He said.
"Just?...um...how do I say this....just"
"Um...are you going to say it or not?" He said.
"Alright! Alright! MINE ARE JUST TOO SMALL OKAY!!!" ligihting strike I said it, must boys like ones that are big, not small! Now I don't think he will want to do this anymore! Good bye boyfriend!
"You probaly don't like me anymore...right?" I said looking at him.
Then he crawls to me and says.
"I don't care about size........all I care about is you!"
I think I'm melting.
"I don't care about the size....not one bit......and I will not try to laugh at you...okay?" He said.
I just look at him with a smile and say.
"Are you sure you will not laugh?" I said.
"I'm 100% sure." He said with a smile.
"o-okay" I unhooked it. Then I tossed it, right on top of the dress. He just stares at me......he's just looking at me....and my chest I have my arms to cover them.....then I start think I want to show him how much I love him I took my arms away from my chest.........Then he looks at me....... With blush all over his face. He doesn't notice my face at all. He just stares. Then he grins turns his head and cracks a little laugh.
"See I knew you would laugh." I try to get back, but I couldn't.
"Oh man! where is the thing." Then he grabs my hands and pulls my down to the floor. Then he looks at me with those brown bangs hitting my face. Then he says.
"I don't think there......small." He says smiling....with a look that almost made me blush.
"Then what do you think?" I said. Turning my head.
"I think there......" He's touching them, with his hands...he's also digging his fingers into them...... My face blushes and I close my eyes. I think I want this anymore!
"Beautiful." He kisses me.
"just like you." He kisses and starts to make out with me. Then he says. "I love you..." He starts to kiss me neck.
" I love you" He says again.
"I love you..with all of my heart..." Then he kissing me all over me...I close my eyes and blush harder and harder the lower he gets.Then I said as I'm now on top of him.
"I love you too." I put him hear my body so hard.
-Daniel's p.o.v.-
I'm blushing so hard I can feel them...there warm..... and also really soft. Then I let go of her. Then I go ontop of her again and say. "I...." I kiss her on her chin.
"I" I kiss her on the mouth.
Then I kiss her chest.
"I love you."
I think I can here her groan.
-Melissa's p.o.v.-
I he's...he's kissing them....both of them.....right on the dot....He's kissing them harder. I can...feel him...biting them
"Ow!" I said..
He looks at me with at my face and sees me in pain.
He looks at me with those big brown eyes.
"Sorry..maybe...this will help." He goes down to my chest again and licks them...his..tongue is....so........wet...then it happened!
"groan! 0//////0" I look at him he looks at me....pulls me off of the car floor, and he just blushes at me. What do I do KNOW!!!
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This is good..xD
Continue please =X
thank you :D
really good :)
thank you. and I will continue.
good story!!
thank you! It means a lot coming from you.
OMG SO HOT PLEASE I BEG U CONTINUE WRITING THIS,from the part u stoped though ehh wink wink i want details a lot of details hehe wow so awesome
thank you. I will continue writing this, from the part were I left off. And...the details.......(grinning and laughing) would you really like to know what happens? :)
like CRAZYYYYY!!!!!!!!!
No i love u more xD that was awesome keep wrightting them
I will! and thank you.
more please this is great!!! omg did her mother see it!!?!?!
no..autally it's the boyfriend's mom. (dun dun dun)