Should I start writing again? (Read intro)
Thanks for viewing this...Here is one of my old stories that I wrote a while back. I have been told my writing style is different by quite a few people, so please tell me what you think. Should I start writing again?
Chapter 1
As The Rain Falls (about a girl getting over her writers block)
As I sit here, I wait. I wait for that brilliant idea. That idea I get that pops into my thoughtful mind and spreads a smile across my face making me jump up in excitement. Then I would say something like 'I got it! I know what I'm going to write about!'
But things have changed this time. Instead of writing a story about that brilliant idea I'm just sitting, listening, thinking, and looking. Sitting here on top of my bench that's against a wall with a window right above it, listening to the rain crash into my window and the wind roaring by, thinking about what I shall write about next, and looking out that window watching the rain pour down seeing the raindrops it leaves behind on everything. With a notebook laying in my lap, opened to a clean random page blank with only the blue lines waiting to be written on, wishing the wordless empty sheet of paper was no longer a wordless empty sheet of paper.
The trees are dripping, like their crying, maybe wishing for the sunlight to return? Their tears are making puddles in the grass and dark skies responsible for this dull day.
As the rain dies down the clouds are swept out of the sky causing the sun to shine bring warmth to everything. A beautiful, six-colored rainbow joins the sky and my idea that I have been waiting for has arrived.
But things have changed this time. Instead of writing a story about that brilliant idea I'm just sitting, listening, thinking, and looking. Sitting here on top of my bench that's against a wall with a window right above it, listening to the rain crash into my window and the wind roaring by, thinking about what I shall write about next, and looking out that window watching the rain pour down seeing the raindrops it leaves behind on everything. With a notebook laying in my lap, opened to a clean random page blank with only the blue lines waiting to be written on, wishing the wordless empty sheet of paper was no longer a wordless empty sheet of paper.
The trees are dripping, like their crying, maybe wishing for the sunlight to return? Their tears are making puddles in the grass and dark skies responsible for this dull day.
As the rain dies down the clouds are swept out of the sky causing the sun to shine bring warmth to everything. A beautiful, six-colored rainbow joins the sky and my idea that I have been waiting for has arrived.



13 Comments
That's great! You should write more!
Thank you!!!
Great story. Plz write more :)
Thanks!
Wonderful, incredible, awesome, fantastic!!!!! See I told you to start writing agaain!!!!! You rock! :)
I do?!?!? Aw thanks but you're even better!!
That was....... deep.
You really think so? ...well thanks :)
You should never EVER stop writing!! That was beautiful :D
Thank you so much! That means a lot!
lol no prob..... i dont think u should stop writing, to some people it seems like you can just let youself go in ur writing, telling "people" things that we couldnt even imagine of confessing about ourselves to ourselves..... if that makes any sense. either way, dont stop writing.
Yes of course you do! And you are just as good as you say I am but I think your better. :)
it's super nice!