The Seas may be rough, and the winds, may be harsh...
This story you're about to read, has some graphic things that the squeemish might not want to read, so be warned only people with an iron stomach should read this. However, I feel that this story might appeal to some of you.
"Good morning, miss Fae!" I heard a too happy voice sing.
"shut-up and go away, it's like 7:34 in the morning." I said, burying my face further in my pillow.
"That is no way to act like a princess!" The voice said.
"mrrmph." I mumbled into my pillow.
I was yanked out of my bed and the light shone through the window right on my face.
"I don't take kindly to you skipping your duties for a little extra sleep." Said Clari my 'helper'.
"Ha! Duties, yeah, giving up myself to men, who don't have any brain, and even have to have their grapes peeled and fed to them from the stem!" I shot back.
"That is NOT how a princess should talk." Said Clari
"Hey Clari, maybe gasp I don't wanna be a princess! Oh no, it's the end of the word!" I said making her more mad.
"Just get in your clothes." She said venom dripping from her voice, and then with a glare in her eye, she left.
"Well I might as well freak out some suitors today." I said smirking
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later at Fae's throne room.
"L-lady Fae, I am Prince duke of the kingdom of Cariton an I-" Said this skinny little wimp before I cut him off.
"Can you hold on a second?" I asked.
"O-of course!" He said.
I flung up a walnut in the air and then a dagger, then caught the sliced walnut in my left hand and the dagger came down, and to my surprize landed between my fingers.
"Well, I expected the dagger to gash my hand open, huh, I guess i'm just not lucky." I said partly to myself, and partly to the stick of a human across from me.
"N-not l-lucky?!" He exclaimed. "Are you trying to kill yourself?" He asked.
"No, It seems that death has held a grudge against me, and will not let me part from this world." I said figeting with my dagger.
"Y-you're a freak!" He said running out of the room.
I chuckled to myself. "If I wanted to be dead, I would have been a long time ago.
I streched put on my couch. Then a knock at the door.
"come in." I said hanging my head on the arm of my chair.
In walked in Clari.
"Fae, I belive it's time for you to go to sleep." she said perky like.
"Yeah" I said getting up.
"Goodnight princess fae." she said curtsying
"Shut-up." I said walking out.
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"I've been wanting to do this forever!" I wispered to myself.
I looked out at the Town clock, 12:04 pm. Perfect.
I was already dressed and had my stuff packed up.
I walked to the dresser and opened the top of it, and pulled out a silver nail.
With the nail, I punctured my ear, and pulled out a little loop of blue glass and put it on.
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>FF at the ship yard
Is my ship ready yet, Anni? I asked the tan girl at the other side of the counter.
"Yeah, Fea, are you sure you wanna do this?" she asked me.
"Anni, you know I've been wanting to do this since my mother killed everyone." I said, in mono-tone.
"Alright, then, The Hades Secret awaits." She said pointing to the black oak ship sitting in the harbor, it looked as if it was a part of the sea, the moon shining on it made both the sea and the ship look like each other.
"thanks, Anni." I said walking out onto the peir
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"The Hades Secret, huh?" I said, "Sounds like we're all gonna find out what it is." I said, my voice practicly dripping with my smirk.
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well how was it? yes, short, and the most sad part was....it took me around a year to finish. yes, I am lazy, thank you very much. now, COMMENT COMMENT COMMENT!!!! seriously, I need your guy's input. THXXXXX
~`~B.M.N.~`~
"shut-up and go away, it's like 7:34 in the morning." I said, burying my face further in my pillow.
"That is no way to act like a princess!" The voice said.
"mrrmph." I mumbled into my pillow.
I was yanked out of my bed and the light shone through the window right on my face.
"I don't take kindly to you skipping your duties for a little extra sleep." Said Clari my 'helper'.
"Ha! Duties, yeah, giving up myself to men, who don't have any brain, and even have to have their grapes peeled and fed to them from the stem!" I shot back.
"That is NOT how a princess should talk." Said Clari
"Hey Clari, maybe gasp I don't wanna be a princess! Oh no, it's the end of the word!" I said making her more mad.
"Just get in your clothes." She said venom dripping from her voice, and then with a glare in her eye, she left.
"Well I might as well freak out some suitors today." I said smirking
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later at Fae's throne room.
"L-lady Fae, I am Prince duke of the kingdom of Cariton an I-" Said this skinny little wimp before I cut him off.
"Can you hold on a second?" I asked.
"O-of course!" He said.
I flung up a walnut in the air and then a dagger, then caught the sliced walnut in my left hand and the dagger came down, and to my surprize landed between my fingers.
"Well, I expected the dagger to gash my hand open, huh, I guess i'm just not lucky." I said partly to myself, and partly to the stick of a human across from me.
"N-not l-lucky?!" He exclaimed. "Are you trying to kill yourself?" He asked.
"No, It seems that death has held a grudge against me, and will not let me part from this world." I said figeting with my dagger.
"Y-you're a freak!" He said running out of the room.
I chuckled to myself. "If I wanted to be dead, I would have been a long time ago.
I streched put on my couch. Then a knock at the door.
"come in." I said hanging my head on the arm of my chair.
In walked in Clari.
"Fae, I belive it's time for you to go to sleep." she said perky like.
"Yeah" I said getting up.
"Goodnight princess fae." she said curtsying
"Shut-up." I said walking out.
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"I've been wanting to do this forever!" I wispered to myself.
I looked out at the Town clock, 12:04 pm. Perfect.
I was already dressed and had my stuff packed up.
I walked to the dresser and opened the top of it, and pulled out a silver nail.
With the nail, I punctured my ear, and pulled out a little loop of blue glass and put it on.
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>FF at the ship yard
Is my ship ready yet, Anni? I asked the tan girl at the other side of the counter.
"Yeah, Fea, are you sure you wanna do this?" she asked me.
"Anni, you know I've been wanting to do this since my mother killed everyone." I said, in mono-tone.
"Alright, then, The Hades Secret awaits." She said pointing to the black oak ship sitting in the harbor, it looked as if it was a part of the sea, the moon shining on it made both the sea and the ship look like each other.
"thanks, Anni." I said walking out onto the peir
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~``
"The Hades Secret, huh?" I said, "Sounds like we're all gonna find out what it is." I said, my voice practicly dripping with my smirk.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
well how was it? yes, short, and the most sad part was....it took me around a year to finish. yes, I am lazy, thank you very much. now, COMMENT COMMENT COMMENT!!!! seriously, I need your guy's input. THXXXXX
~`~B.M.N.~`~
18 Comments
This is really good!
THANK YOU! someone finally comments, i'm not loved D':
THANK YOU! someone finally comments, i'm not loved D':
Dude this is masively good. write more
THXXX!!! VIRTUAL CUPCAKE FOR YOU!!!!
Yay!!!! I like cupcakes
it's pretty good, never really read a story like this
Really? Wow, I guess i'm original then XD
i liked it. i can't wait till you finish!!!
Thx! that really means a whole lot!
Not to be rude or anything, but I suggest spell check. Incorrect spelling bugs me....
AUGGG! ME TOO! HAVE TO FIX IT!!!
Well, actually I don't know how to spell some of this :P sorry Vix
It's fine. ^0^ I always type my chapters on Word/Works, so I can spell check it. (:
ok cool, I might start drafting them on microsoft word
This story is pretty good, I'd read on.
Though, maybe some details could be written along, i.e: what people look like, what the area around them is like, ect. You don't have to of course, it just bothers me when no one describes the character (visually). It's always good for everyone to see the same character when reading a story.
I just Like to let people make their own visuals (sp?) And if I discribed her now, it'd just be a waste of time because her appearance is going to change! :P
oh alright