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Something that I felt I needed to write.
I had a vision of my deep sadness.
We all have something dark that we need to let loose sometimes.
I am only human
His pain is mine
His heart that cracked into a million pieces was mine
The blood that coursed through his living veins was always mine
The lonely days he endures are mine
His existence in reality was not seen so nor was I
The words he can not speak are still inside me
The wretched hate in me dwells and because no one can hear him they cannot see me suffer
I have nothing
I have no one
I have everything and no one to share it with
He has nothing and He has no one
So together we stand alone
We have each other to share
Letting our pain and worries
Entwine us
As his hand takes mine
We fall into the depths of nothing together
Letting our deceptions be our advice
Convinced on the inside that there is so much more
As we travel to another world.
His heart that cracked into a million pieces was mine
The blood that coursed through his living veins was always mine
The lonely days he endures are mine
His existence in reality was not seen so nor was I
The words he can not speak are still inside me
The wretched hate in me dwells and because no one can hear him they cannot see me suffer
I have nothing
I have no one
I have everything and no one to share it with
He has nothing and He has no one
So together we stand alone
We have each other to share
Letting our pain and worries
Entwine us
As his hand takes mine
We fall into the depths of nothing together
Letting our deceptions be our advice
Convinced on the inside that there is so much more
As we travel to another world.
20 Comments
Very good!
thnx my friend for your wonderful comment!
glad you liked it
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i like........... though its sad :(........
Yes I would agree.
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thnx my friend for your comment
u are very welcome :D
one word: AWESOME!!! =D
why, spank ya very much hayley!!!!
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Cool :)
Not cool that you are sad, I just like the poem. If your having problems or something feel free to message me.
yep, yep. i wasn't offended at all my friend. it was a little something that i had to let out in words written on a paper.
thnx for your comment it is nice to get em.
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awww....its sad, but its wonderful...... =)
Yea it is, but I am happy you found it good! i thank you for your comment my friend!!!
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really awesome...love it
=) thnx my friend for your comment it is awesome to get em!!
thnx soooo much! glad u liked it too!
So sad :( But really good writing!
thnx a bunch my friend!
happy to see you enjoyed it
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Your welcome btw how are things?
This was really good!!!!!
I hope your feeling better or at least not sad! :)
It was very well written and very enjoyable.... despite the sadness lol :)