Lilly's Last Halloween
My story for the Halloween Contest and perhaps it might be more.
Its Edward Cullen with an EVIL twist.
Enjoy my friends
Chapter 1
The Promising Vision
EDWARD'S POV
My early morning started normal, sitting on the bench near the piano. I was staring at its keys trying to think of something new to compose ,when Alice’s vision started to blast its way into my mind as she was seeing it for the first time.
Today, I was going to meet with a human , that would change the way I see myself.
Thirst clinging to my aching body and the dark in my eyes began to swim around and for this moment my Reaper surfaced.
My days of drinking human blood have been over but now, evilly in my mind I smile at the thought of taking a life that could quench my thirst for human blood for more than a century. It feels so easy, so right.
Smirking to myself as I begin composing a dark, thunderous sound from my piano.
Alice’s footsteps rushed to my side and sits next to me. In her eyes I could see fear, and question, maybe even doubting me that I wouldn’t, couldn’t or shouldn’t.
The tempo to the new song was quickening and I would continually increase and decrease this tempo, matching it to the fluttering fear in her eyes as she continues searching for me not to kill the girl.
The more she searched, the easier it got for me to see her die in so many ways. So many outcomes to drink her dry and let the devil in me go wild for once in my long miserable life.
The pain of never having a drop of human blood in all the different eras of this world was beginning to look too disheartening. Too much disgrace, for once I am understanding what it means to be a vampire.
Giving into the madness was easy, it was like water streaming rapidly across my cold stone skin.
Jasper swiftly makes an appearance and his hand rests on my shoulder as he is taken over himself, lost in the madness that surrounds this room emanating, from me. My eyes glossed black and in his mind he pleads.
Brother, no. You are better than this! Don’t do it.
His voice strained trying so hard to resist the temptation himself, as he pleads for me to suffer with him.
Then I begrudge it entirely and naturally, I might add.
“I am sorry my family but it is time.”
Ghostly I left, but as I turn to look back at the mansion Esme is standing with Carlisle their faces deep with concern, and their thoughts corresponding that very concern.
Please come back to us.
I successfully rob a car in the next town.
My talent for a quickness is really quite absurd.
This world is too easy to control. Humans are weak.
Now the only thing is to travel to the next state where I meet her.
And charm her with what every vampire man uses against their female prey…/invite/ her to me.
Certainly my perfect face and jaw structure would effectively lure any woman near me. I once despised it, but tonight and the next I will invite her with everything I have. When the time is right…..soak myself in that rich intoxicating blood.
please rate and comment thank you my friends u rock for reading my story!
* I hope you Like it!!*
My early morning started normal, sitting on the bench near the piano. I was staring at its keys trying to think of something new to compose ,when Alice’s vision started to blast its way into my mind as she was seeing it for the first time.
Today, I was going to meet with a human , that would change the way I see myself.
Thirst clinging to my aching body and the dark in my eyes began to swim around and for this moment my Reaper surfaced.
My days of drinking human blood have been over but now, evilly in my mind I smile at the thought of taking a life that could quench my thirst for human blood for more than a century. It feels so easy, so right.
Smirking to myself as I begin composing a dark, thunderous sound from my piano.
Alice’s footsteps rushed to my side and sits next to me. In her eyes I could see fear, and question, maybe even doubting me that I wouldn’t, couldn’t or shouldn’t.
The tempo to the new song was quickening and I would continually increase and decrease this tempo, matching it to the fluttering fear in her eyes as she continues searching for me not to kill the girl.
The more she searched, the easier it got for me to see her die in so many ways. So many outcomes to drink her dry and let the devil in me go wild for once in my long miserable life.
The pain of never having a drop of human blood in all the different eras of this world was beginning to look too disheartening. Too much disgrace, for once I am understanding what it means to be a vampire.
Giving into the madness was easy, it was like water streaming rapidly across my cold stone skin.
Jasper swiftly makes an appearance and his hand rests on my shoulder as he is taken over himself, lost in the madness that surrounds this room emanating, from me. My eyes glossed black and in his mind he pleads.
Brother, no. You are better than this! Don’t do it.
His voice strained trying so hard to resist the temptation himself, as he pleads for me to suffer with him.
Then I begrudge it entirely and naturally, I might add.
“I am sorry my family but it is time.”
Ghostly I left, but as I turn to look back at the mansion Esme is standing with Carlisle their faces deep with concern, and their thoughts corresponding that very concern.
Please come back to us.
I successfully rob a car in the next town.
My talent for a quickness is really quite absurd.
This world is too easy to control. Humans are weak.
Now the only thing is to travel to the next state where I meet her.
And charm her with what every vampire man uses against their female prey…/invite/ her to me.
Certainly my perfect face and jaw structure would effectively lure any woman near me. I once despised it, but tonight and the next I will invite her with everything I have. When the time is right…..soak myself in that rich intoxicating blood.
please rate and comment thank you my friends u rock for reading my story!
* I hope you Like it!!*



51 Comments
Cool! AND YAY! FIRST COMMENT BABY!
Thank u for reading! did you think it was good???
It was great! I'm putting it in favorites!!!
AWE!!! thanks a bunch!
SO EVIL!! i like it!!! :D give me more give me more!! :P keep it smoking sister! :)
YAY!!! i am so glad you thought it was great!! thnx for your comment!!
Ooh, creepy! Edward Cullen's dark side. Interesting... I liked it!
really!! thanks I hope u continue to read it! its a short story pssibly.
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Great!!
thank u thank u!
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Omgg that was awesome NEXT PLEASE!!
thnx my friend glad u read it!
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Omgg that was awesome NEXT PLEASE!!
Love it! Please add to it :)
that was cool!!!! mwahaha Edward with an evil twist!!!
gyahaha sounds funny.....he looks 2...."soft" 2 be evil....lololxDD
hahaha i know but he is a VAMPIRE!!! ihad to do it!did it work out???
Hey thought this was a harry potter story coz of the whole lily bit - but this is just as good! 8-) xx
why thank u very much!! i know you must be a HP fan. I do like to have new readers!! i am so happy to see you enjoyed it! please keep up with it. it will be a short story.
maybe only 4 chapters.
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cool