Help me?
Im thinking about writing a story about a girl who moves into a new house and demons start tormenting her, well along the way she befriends a girl(ghost) who saves her many times... Ik it sounds weird but its something i've been wanting to do for awhile.
Chapter 1
Story problems :/
Read intro... Ok should I make the ghost girl die by getting attacked by an animal in the woods, or by having her parents lock her in a secret part of the house and leaving her?



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Locking her up. I think that's a bit more dramtic than a random animal in the woods.
Ok thank you! xD.. Yea the animal idea i was going to have it where she was sitting in the woods, and it was getting dark so she decides to head home, but on her way back she comes across a pack of coyotes; She runs and they chase her, but she ends up tripping and thats when they kill her.