What should my first sentence be...? Plze read discription
I can't seem to decide which sentence to use first in my story....As most people know, the sentence determines the story....
I can't decide on a first sentence for my story....
1. Blood trickled from her ear as the whip cracked beside it, creating a small, but powerful sonic boom only a few milimeters away.
2.She skipped a flat rock across the frozen pond, where it bounced a few times, then broke through the thin ice right in the middle.
3. Her heart skipped a beat as she looked into the pitch black room, and saw a dark crumpled figure lying on the floor, slowly dragging its way towards her.
4. He gasped for air as he heard the closet door lock, and the cruel voices laughing at him and his phobia outside faded as he clawed desperately at the handle.
5. He sat frozen on his bed as he looked out his window, where a tall, slender shadow stood by the tree, facing his direction.
Whichever one gets the most picks will be the start of my next story. (I personally like the dark room with the crumpled figure on the ground, but my vote doesn't count.)
1. Blood trickled from her ear as the whip cracked beside it, creating a small, but powerful sonic boom only a few milimeters away.
2.She skipped a flat rock across the frozen pond, where it bounced a few times, then broke through the thin ice right in the middle.
3. Her heart skipped a beat as she looked into the pitch black room, and saw a dark crumpled figure lying on the floor, slowly dragging its way towards her.
4. He gasped for air as he heard the closet door lock, and the cruel voices laughing at him and his phobia outside faded as he clawed desperately at the handle.
5. He sat frozen on his bed as he looked out his window, where a tall, slender shadow stood by the tree, facing his direction.
Whichever one gets the most picks will be the start of my next story. (I personally like the dark room with the crumpled figure on the ground, but my vote doesn't count.)
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I like 5 and 3 but probably 5 more, I dunno why.
those are my two favorites as well. X3