Which one is the Best? hey guys...these are a couple of starts to stories that my friend and i came up with. if you could take this and give us feedback in the comments...that would be great...

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- "It still feels like summer, but...different," Harmony sighed, "A blanket insted of towels, jeans instead of bathing suits, sneakers intead of flip-flops...but the same old sun-" "-same old ozone hole," Ceka added. "Same old atmosphere."
- I screamed. "oh, it's just you, Gizmo. you scared me." I started stroking his mottled back. "Do you know why Dawn isn't here yet? No, of course you don't....but im starting to worry..." She never showed up.
- There's a calm surrender, to the rush of day, with no individuals, just blurs of similairity. Some of these smears stick out, bright reds and greens on a dull grey canvas, a canvas ruined by humanity. God, I hate humanity.

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