Bioshock: Cohen's Masterpiece
Chapter 1
Mr. Cohen
NO! NO! NO! ITS ALL WRONG!! said cohen. Look im sorry. ill just start over. Kyle Fitzpatrick said trembling. How dare you try to do such a thing! there are no second chances in the theater. cohen looks down at kyle who is playing a piano straped with dynamite. Kyle starts to weep. Cohen you psycho! let me go! Sorry Fitzpatrick but you have... how do i put this "Blown" your chances. Cohen pulls a lever and the piano along with Fitzpatrick are blown into a thousand pieces leaving a cloud of smoke and grafiti like bits. A city at the bottom of the ocean filled with psychos and you would think one would play piano decently. Stupid insignificant SPLICERS!! Cohen yells threw his sanctuary.



2 Comments
cool :) its really good
It looks really good, the only thing that would make it better is if you used quotations when the person is speaking. :) But I liked it