Okay. I am going to sound incredibly needy.

I need serious help. I hate that when I ask for criticism I only get spelling. I need seriuos help with my stories. PLease! PLEASE help me!!!!! here are the links. You can tell me in comments on this what you think or on the stories themselves, heck you can even message me. I just want HELP!!!

The Backwards Tale of Liz Herlone
Here's the link -----------> http://www.quibblo.com/quiz/fBo9X6h/Backwards-Tale-Of-Liz-Herlone

Andi
Here's the link -----------> http://www.quibblo.com/quiz/fGryOUP/Andi



Thank you guys!


p.s- you can be as mean as you feel necesary!