A Stupid Poem
This is a really stupid poem. I wanted to write a poem about a friend but it turned into something else and Idk what it is. You may ignore this if you choose. However, if you do read this, one of the lines is a Keane song. Well, the whole line minus the last word. If you don't know which it is, you can google it and tell me in the comments or something. If anyone even cares. Idk. I'm bored.
You say no one knows you
You want to be understood
Heard word for word
By someone in the world
Why do you look for comfort
In places you can't enter?
Because I've tried to get in
And you've shut me out
I just want to know
Why you complain
Why you are bitter
Why you can't trust me
I've tried to give more
But you never take it
And when I back off
You don't see me anymore
I just want one smile
One look of recognition
For you to realize
You are loved
You want to be understood
Heard word for word
By someone in the world
Why do you look for comfort
In places you can't enter?
Because I've tried to get in
And you've shut me out
I just want to know
Why you complain
Why you are bitter
Why you can't trust me
I've tried to give more
But you never take it
And when I back off
You don't see me anymore
I just want one smile
One look of recognition
For you to realize
You are loved
84 Comments
I dont think thats stupid! its really good :)
Thank you!
yw :))) ur jst in denial btw :P
Lol, honestly, I like a lot of my other poems better. I guess I like what I was trying to say, but I don't like how it came out. I also probably don't like it because I tried to do something and failed at it. It started off as being about my friend but then turned into something different and I guess I kinda hate failing.
You ddnt fail lol thats a fact :D
Haha thanks but I didn't accomplish my goal. But thank you.
THIS IS AMAZING!!! I LOVE IT! IT IS SOOOO NOT STUPPID!!!
Lol am I the only one who does not like this poem at all? Thanks.
Well I don't get you. This clearly isn't stupid. ^.^ I love it!
Lol thanks. It just didn't turn out the way I wanted it to, but thank you!
NOT. STUPID! ^_^ Great! XD
Thank you!
its great! If i could write that well, I would!
Thanks! And I'm sure you can write well. These poems are literally just my thoughts broken up into different lines to sound poetic. :P
aww... It reminds me of my real life friend... We used 2 b best friends, but I don't know what happened... Well, It's very well put :)
Aw. I understand. This poem was meant to be about 2 of my friends, but it turned out a little different. Thank you, thank you very much.
EMBRACE YOU AND THIS POEMS AWESOMNESS!!! YOU DO NOT SUCK AT WRITIN!!!!!!!
Looks scared Okay, okay. Please don't eat me!
I won;t, but BB might looks over at BB who is trying to stab Matt to death he once stole MY blood fo the blood bank and drank it...He is RUTHLESS!
whistles Hmph. That's why I have a man-eating unicorn. He can't kill a man-eating unicorn. He's not faster than my man-eating unicorn... hopefully...
BB: eats your man eating unicorn
Me: He's a psychopathic serial murdered, he's fast, and can kill anything What did you expect? lol
No he didn't. That wasn't my man-eating unicorn. Man-eating unicorn comes and eats BB Wait... isn't he supposed to be dead anyways?
Me: I RESURECTED HIM WITH MY SHINIGAMI AWESOMENESS! does Grelle awesome pose
Oh. Well he was eaten. Better resurrect him again. Hey, btw, have you seen Ryuk? I've been trying to get him to meet my man-eating unicorn but he's been avoiding me.