You've Been Struck By.. A Smooth Criminal!!!

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Chapter 1

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by: Diana_Is_Sleepy
Michael- (Smooth Criminal) cute!!
Cynthia- Michael's love intrest and mobster's daughter
Jason- Cynthia's father, Michael's enemy
The first chapter is coming soon!!! (Tomorrow):))

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22 Comments

  • Angelica_Rose 10-19-2011 at 8:17 PM 0 0

    YA!!!!
    I lollllooooovvvveeeeee me some smoooth criminal!!!!!

  • Vienna_Jackson 10-19-2011 at 8:19 PM 0 0

    i just can't control my feet!!!! (from blame it on the boogie, lol XD)
    haha. HEE HEE, AAOW!!!!! (translation: yay! i can't wait)

    i did the translation cuz i'm going to be doing that often. lol

  • ExcuseMyMiNdLeSsNeSs 10-19-2011 at 8:43 PM 0 0

    YAYZEZ!!!!!! :D

  • MJmyAngel 10-19-2011 at 8:54 PM 0 0

    soounds like a good story

  • TRUPYT 10-19-2011 at 9:44 PM 0 0

    Woohoo!!!! I'm so excited, and I just can't hide it!!! LOL I love that song XD

  • Angelica_Rose 10-20-2011 at 2:01 PM 0 0

    hahahhahaha
    =)

  • TRUPYT 10-19-2011 at 9:50 PM 0 0

    Wow!!!! What a first chapter!!! Awesome!!!!

  • IvanaJacksonXD 10-19-2011 at 10:39 PM 0 0

    Cool! Next :)

  • MJmyAngel 10-19-2011 at 11:19 PM 0 0

    wow whaznt expecting that plus some funnies in there

  • Dirtydiana 10-20-2011 at 8:58 AM 0 0

    wow i love doing crimes lol though i never did in my life i love it next pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

  • Angelica_Rose 10-20-2011 at 1:56 PM 0 0

    WOW!!
    it is really great!!
    its so awesome!
    thnx for sharing this story with us!!!!!!
    5 stars
    =)

  • Diana_Is_Sleepy 10-20-2011 at 1:58 PM 0 0

    Oh, thanx!!!! :))))) ^_^!!! (computer hugs)

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