Undead and Uncaring (well at least i WAS)
Okay so this is a vampyre story.
The girls name is Luna (to humans) and Valkyrie (to Vampyres)
She didnt care about anybody or anything, but that soon changes....
comment plz.
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Chapter 1
Blood..... yummy!
The man in the alley was lost. He'd been heading home late after a party and his drink muddled brain lost the way. Leaning against the wall and hanging his head in his hands, he groans.
A lilting laugh comes from the entrance to the alley way. Looking up the man's eyes widen at the girl smiling at him, her eyes gazing hungrily at him. She walks forwards her midnight black hair swinging behind her. Her lips part, not revealing teeth.
"What are you doing out so late?" she asks, softly.
"What are you?" the man replies, stumbling away from the wall.
"I'm looking for something to eat" she says, stepping forwards again.
"There's a...a... diner around the...corner" mumbles the suddenly nervous man.
"Oh, but i want something dfferent" she mutters, looking up at him through her eyelashes. The man steps back. This beautiful woman has started to make him edgy.
"What do you want?" he asks, looking for a way out of the alley.
"You" she replies calmy before looking up, her lips curling over her teeth to reveal two pointed fangs. The man screams and turns to run, of course there is no where to go. When he turns around the girl is gone. Blinking in astonishment he sighs in releif
"Maybe it was just a hallucination' he mutters. A light wight falls on his back and he freezes.
"Nope" mutters a bittersweet voice before the girl digs her fangs into the mans neck. He screams once in pain before hushing and groaning. The girl continues until every last drop is gone. Picking up his body she throws it into a river
Walking away she looks up, her eyes glowing red, and smiles...
So this is just the beginning so i can tell if people will want to read it...
So if u want more comment, rate and friend XD please
A lilting laugh comes from the entrance to the alley way. Looking up the man's eyes widen at the girl smiling at him, her eyes gazing hungrily at him. She walks forwards her midnight black hair swinging behind her. Her lips part, not revealing teeth.
"What are you doing out so late?" she asks, softly.
"What are you?" the man replies, stumbling away from the wall.
"I'm looking for something to eat" she says, stepping forwards again.
"There's a...a... diner around the...corner" mumbles the suddenly nervous man.
"Oh, but i want something dfferent" she mutters, looking up at him through her eyelashes. The man steps back. This beautiful woman has started to make him edgy.
"What do you want?" he asks, looking for a way out of the alley.
"You" she replies calmy before looking up, her lips curling over her teeth to reveal two pointed fangs. The man screams and turns to run, of course there is no where to go. When he turns around the girl is gone. Blinking in astonishment he sighs in releif
"Maybe it was just a hallucination' he mutters. A light wight falls on his back and he freezes.
"Nope" mutters a bittersweet voice before the girl digs her fangs into the mans neck. He screams once in pain before hushing and groaning. The girl continues until every last drop is gone. Picking up his body she throws it into a river
Walking away she looks up, her eyes glowing red, and smiles...
So this is just the beginning so i can tell if people will want to read it...
So if u want more comment, rate and friend XD please



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Great start! you write more ill write more! lol keep writing
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I luvvvved it!!!! cant wait for the next chapter!!! :)
Wow! Loving it! And the whole "sexy" idea, to make him stay there is brilliant! Keep it up!
Intruiging! Keep writing!
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Interesting! I'd love to read some more! :)
that was cool!
I cant wait 2 read the rest