Twilight: A Quiluete Legend: The First Imprint
Hi guys, this is on Twilight, Jacobs my fav character so i hope you like this!
PLZ COMMENT, dont you know how disappointing it is to have no one even press 10 keys to say "Nice work?"
I'd rather have my story be hated then ignored.
Sorry if I come off quite opininated.
Chapter 1
What's worse, Homework or Heartbreak?
My heart lurched as I walked into school, expecting to see my boyfriend walking towards me. Instead I saw a sight I should never have saw, Justin with his mouth moving quickly, talking to a blonde, tall ans skinny chick. I saw the girl's boyfriend nostril's flair with anger, then he set off towards his locker. I wanted to run towards him and just tell him how I could relate to him, but I couldn't take my eyes of Justin, and how comfortable he looked, and wondering how long he had been flirting with other girls. Instead of anger, numbness took over. Without a backwards glance, I headed towards my locker. I stuck around just long enough to hear "Katy, Avril means nothing to me. "
Class today was torture, i was left with a million thoughts. What did I do wrong? When did he change his mind? Why, of all people me?
Are Justin and I over?
"Avril!"
I looked around foggily. "What?"
My best friend, Alisha stood in front of me, waving her hand in front of my face. "Took you long enough," she grumbled, still smiling. "So, I heard that you and Justin are over!"
"Not now, Alisha. "I waved her hand on my shoulder away, trying to be in denial as long as I could.
"You could com over today! My parents are out so we can be as loud as we want and you can moan as much as u want!"
I felt a rush of relief flow through me, but I knew I couldn't."Thanks, but I'll have to decline. My parents don't like me having sleepovers at someone else's house."
Alisha pouted for a second, then her face brightened. "That's ok, we can have it at your house!"
I laughed at her reaction, as tense as I was. "Sure, I'll ask."
"Great!" She walked away, then flashed the 'call me' symbol my way.
I was laughing when I ran into Justin.
"We still on for tonight?" He asked earnestly, looking into my eyes.
I snorted with disdain.
"What?"
I imitated his voice. "Katy, Avril means nothing to me!"
"Hey, its not my fault you came to school early." His eyes showed his anger.
"What kind of a statement is that? You've been betraying me all this time. Ugh, I was such a fool."I brushed him aside, looking at the ground.
"I can't believe your turning into this type of girl."
"OH, you mean the type of girl talks to you without fainting in absolute love?" I snapped, putting my hand to my head and imitating a faint. "It may come as a surprise to you, but not every girl melts from your appearance."
"How dare you!" he accused, eyes narrowed.
I waved my hand in a goodbye, and stormed towards my new car. "Whatever."
"You know, you do mean nothing to me!" Justin spat, before leaving.
I'm glad he didn't see the tears streaming down my face.
"I just thought he was a good guy." I said gloomily to Alisha, who was painting my nails a hot pink.
"Well sweetie," she said sympathetically, "sometimes things just don't work out."
I sighed, but admired my nails when she was done. "It's a good colour on me."
"I know, " she said, shrugging it off, but I could see the compliment set in. She had always wanted to be a fashion designer, and she needed to know the grand colour scheme of things on people. Stuff like this really helped her.
Well, I'd better do my homework, i thought as an afterthought. Quickly I brushed the thought aside. I hated doing my homework,and I was with Alisha.
That was when the phone rang.
Class today was torture, i was left with a million thoughts. What did I do wrong? When did he change his mind? Why, of all people me?
Are Justin and I over?
"Avril!"
I looked around foggily. "What?"
My best friend, Alisha stood in front of me, waving her hand in front of my face. "Took you long enough," she grumbled, still smiling. "So, I heard that you and Justin are over!"
"Not now, Alisha. "I waved her hand on my shoulder away, trying to be in denial as long as I could.
"You could com over today! My parents are out so we can be as loud as we want and you can moan as much as u want!"
I felt a rush of relief flow through me, but I knew I couldn't."Thanks, but I'll have to decline. My parents don't like me having sleepovers at someone else's house."
Alisha pouted for a second, then her face brightened. "That's ok, we can have it at your house!"
I laughed at her reaction, as tense as I was. "Sure, I'll ask."
"Great!" She walked away, then flashed the 'call me' symbol my way.
I was laughing when I ran into Justin.
"We still on for tonight?" He asked earnestly, looking into my eyes.
I snorted with disdain.
"What?"
I imitated his voice. "Katy, Avril means nothing to me!"
"Hey, its not my fault you came to school early." His eyes showed his anger.
"What kind of a statement is that? You've been betraying me all this time. Ugh, I was such a fool."I brushed him aside, looking at the ground.
"I can't believe your turning into this type of girl."
"OH, you mean the type of girl talks to you without fainting in absolute love?" I snapped, putting my hand to my head and imitating a faint. "It may come as a surprise to you, but not every girl melts from your appearance."
"How dare you!" he accused, eyes narrowed.
I waved my hand in a goodbye, and stormed towards my new car. "Whatever."
"You know, you do mean nothing to me!" Justin spat, before leaving.
I'm glad he didn't see the tears streaming down my face.
"I just thought he was a good guy." I said gloomily to Alisha, who was painting my nails a hot pink.
"Well sweetie," she said sympathetically, "sometimes things just don't work out."
I sighed, but admired my nails when she was done. "It's a good colour on me."
"I know, " she said, shrugging it off, but I could see the compliment set in. She had always wanted to be a fashion designer, and she needed to know the grand colour scheme of things on people. Stuff like this really helped her.
Well, I'd better do my homework, i thought as an afterthought. Quickly I brushed the thought aside. I hated doing my homework,and I was with Alisha.
That was when the phone rang.



2 Comments
Its good :) next please!
awww! thx!