Wizard of Oz: The Final Stand
"But Auntie El!" I begged.
"Dorothy Ethel Gale, I told already told you that you were NOT, under any circumstances, aloud to that party!" my aunt Elizabeth declared.
"You always do this!" I sniffled. She never let me do anything! Not that there really was anything to do in Kansas, but I would have still liked to have some freedom!
"Well, Dora, I'm aloud to tell you what to do since I'm your guardian." Ugh, she even said it in a triumphant tone! I glared at the woman I was forced to live with and stomped to my room. On my way, I pushed past my Uncle Harold and barreled past the stupid farm hands- Oak (heartless hill billy), Chunk (a brainless fool), and Zachary (a useless coward)- all of which grumbled as they knew Elizabeth would be hard on them. But finally, I escaped to my room and plopped on the bed face first.
"The worthless old hag!" I muttered to my small dog, Jojo. I blinked away my oncoming tears and concluded I would be going to that party whether Auntie El liked it or not. I bit my bottom lip and turned to Jojo. A small problem occurred to me, "What am I gonna where?!" I shuffled towards my closet and after about ten minutes of searching aimlessly through my small amount of clothes, an idea hit me! Literally. A box of Auntie El's clothes fell from a shelf and smacked me in the shoulder making her old farm girl clothes spill out onto the floor. I smiled to myself. "This might just work," I said picking up a blue table cloth looking dress.
I'm not even that started yet! But I'm gonna have a lot of chapters so I don't want to bother you with sending lots of messages for it sooooo... Yah (: I hope y'all have fun reading it!
"Dorothy Ethel Gale, I told already told you that you were NOT, under any circumstances, aloud to that party!" my aunt Elizabeth declared.
"You always do this!" I sniffled. She never let me do anything! Not that there really was anything to do in Kansas, but I would have still liked to have some freedom!
"Well, Dora, I'm aloud to tell you what to do since I'm your guardian." Ugh, she even said it in a triumphant tone! I glared at the woman I was forced to live with and stomped to my room. On my way, I pushed past my Uncle Harold and barreled past the stupid farm hands- Oak (heartless hill billy), Chunk (a brainless fool), and Zachary (a useless coward)- all of which grumbled as they knew Elizabeth would be hard on them. But finally, I escaped to my room and plopped on the bed face first.
"The worthless old hag!" I muttered to my small dog, Jojo. I blinked away my oncoming tears and concluded I would be going to that party whether Auntie El liked it or not. I bit my bottom lip and turned to Jojo. A small problem occurred to me, "What am I gonna where?!" I shuffled towards my closet and after about ten minutes of searching aimlessly through my small amount of clothes, an idea hit me! Literally. A box of Auntie El's clothes fell from a shelf and smacked me in the shoulder making her old farm girl clothes spill out onto the floor. I smiled to myself. "This might just work," I said picking up a blue table cloth looking dress.
I'm not even that started yet! But I'm gonna have a lot of chapters so I don't want to bother you with sending lots of messages for it sooooo... Yah (: I hope y'all have fun reading it!
28 Comments
Nice Sal!
Awh, shucks! (: Thank you!!!
Welcome! :D
Aww, I love it!! I'm soo happy you let Jojo live! lol
:D Ikr! I couldn't let him die! After all, Toto lived. xD
Niiiiice!
It means a lot you commented! I read (and adore) your stories! You don't even have a reason to read mine (other than being my friend on here!)!
Whatever! Lol I'm just someone with too much time on their hands and lots of silly ideas XD But thanks for the compliment
Aren't we all? xD And you're welcome!
Oooh Next one please!! Can you please tell me when you upload a new chapter? (:
Sure! I don't want to send one out every time I write a chapter because I write every day :D
ausome chapter sal ^.^
Oh my gosh! thank you (:
Ohkay Thanks! I love it!!
Thank you so much! (:
no prob :D
I think i'd be creeped out if I was Dora, lol. Nice job!(:
IKR! But Dora is so much nicer than I would be xD Thanks so much for commenting!!!!
This story is awesome. You are one of the very few wonderful Quibblo writers! It's very detailed :D
Awh, thank you so much!!! I'm making it really detailed because by the end of the month I want this story to have 50,000 words!!! It's part of Nation Novel Writing Month! I really appreciate you reading my story!!! :D
I love love love love love love love it!!!
Awh, Ali! Thank you (: I'm so glad you read it!!!