Flying on the wings of music
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Do you see that girl over there. Yes, the one sitting under the tree.The one picking at her lunch, the lunch too pathetic to eat. The one who doesn't give a care to the people walking in and out of her school. The one that's listening to the music blaring through her headphones and easily memorizing the lyrics inside her head. Her name is Pheonix Longfellow. She's going to be the main topic in this story. She is going to have a whole new life all with the help of one guy.
One guy who will make her dream come true. Let's see... where did he disappear off to? There. The one inside the school. The one sitting at the desk through the corner window. The one not caring to what his teacher is saying.The one looking out the window at the bluejay flying in the sky. The one wishing that he could be that bird: free and flying. His name is Griffin Marcelet. Together, they will acheive what all little girls and boys dream of. Together, they will make it big.
And now this is how our story begins...
One guy who will make her dream come true. Let's see... where did he disappear off to? There. The one inside the school. The one sitting at the desk through the corner window. The one not caring to what his teacher is saying.The one looking out the window at the bluejay flying in the sky. The one wishing that he could be that bird: free and flying. His name is Griffin Marcelet. Together, they will acheive what all little girls and boys dream of. Together, they will make it big.
And now this is how our story begins...
22 Comments
Title idea? "Flying Free on Life"?
Yay! I'll use it! not what the story is about... but WTH! I don't care anymore!
I love the intro u did a really good job on it
thanks... I appreciate your comments, they make me feel good about myself :)
i love your story! you should make another one soon!
Thanks. I don't know what else I should write about... do you have any ideas? If I like them, I could either write the story by myself, or we could do a group story.
no i don't. I'm sorry. I'm more of a reader than a writer.
oh, that's okay :)
a little bit more about their backgrounds?
thanks for the comment... I will try to work it in there :)
I know u have a title and I really like it but I am just voiceing an idea so that people know its about music flying on the wings of music sorry just an idea lime the chapter can't wait for the next
i like it... i'll combine your idea with my first comment. Thanks!
Yay you used it :D
of course i used it, i loved it.
really?!?!?!!
YES! stop doubting yourself.
Doubting myself is like breathing in my mind.
think happy thoughts!
the lyrics is really good
i told CrazyWriterGeek this and she didn't believe me....!