insanity

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a boy is diagnosed as mentally ill and sent to a mental hospital there his life is turned upside down but soon strange things start happening.....can Troy survive?

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Chapter 1

Welcome Mr. Hellstar

One last reminder please try to excuse any punctuation errors as I try really hard to make sure I don't do that its just a major problem for me. Thanx 4 readin man!


Troy Hellstar lay sprawled out in the back of his Dads car he was reading his diagnosis sheet in a small box titled "mental disorders" it said: Schizo....schizo.... Troy couldn't read it his mind kept getting distracted he sighed and tried again for the billionth time "Schizophrenia" said Raze "Eh?" thought Troy "The word is schizophrenia." said the voice inside Troy's head repeated. Troy had had this voice in his head for as long as he could remember, it seemed to Troy that as the years went by the voice had become more articulate. When he was little the voice wouldn't speak much maybe a word at a time sometimes two or three and it gradually spoke more. became more intelligent when he was thirteen it started calling itself Raze, Troy had looked up that word in the dictionary it meant "to demolish" it knew things Troy didn't and it never lied to him.

'Oh thanks' said troy 'You're welcome' the voice replied "and next on the list it says A.D.H.D.' Troy knew that this was one of the reasons he found it hard to concentrate except maybe on T.V and video games and being in a car with nothing to do BUT read was torture. 'And finally it says Kleptomania. What's that?' Troy relished the fact that he knew something Raze didn't. 'It means I'm a chronic shoplifter that's what.' for a moment Raze seemed confused but soon replied with an understanding "oh....." Finally Troy felt the car begin to slow down. He sat up just in time to see a sign the read "The Cray. Zee institute for insane teenagers." Troy groaned as the gates opened up to allow them to drive in.after they parked they were greeted by a tall man in a grey uniform he led them into the large building that was the Cray Zee institute. The man led them to an office where a man with greying hair and the dullest suit Troy had ever seen was working. It took nearly a full minute for the man to acknowledge them at all he seemed to be doing something of great importance when he looked up and saw his visitors he smiled showing a row of coffee-stained teeth. he stood up and introduced himself 'Hello my name is Dr. Zee, and you must be Troy.' he held out a hand for Troy to shake Troy looked at it and chose to ignore it. He glanced the paper Dr. Zee had been working on. It was a sketch of mickey mouse. Troy smirked "Very productive." said Raze. As Troy came back to reality he noticed Dr. Zee talking to his dad '....well Mr. Hellstar I believe we should show Troy here to his room.' He led them out of his office and into a lift it played Elvis' song "blue suede shoes" when the elevator stopped they walked past various rooms and people Troy noticed a few in particular like a girl he'd seen in the news he didn't remember her first name but her last name was Beyonde. She'd been on the front page of the news paper because she murdered three people for making fun of how her family died... Next there was a girl screaming at a window. A boy who was smiling as he stabbed himself in the leg. A guy with a six-pack yelling 'Stay back! STAY BACK!!!! I have the sword of Azeroth!!!' As he swiped at imaginary things with a metal spork. A girl who laughed maniacally as she expertly twirled a lit match around her hand Troy recognised her too she was Saphira Burkhart: a pyromaniac who set her school on fire. Then a boy who cried as he played a harmonica. Finally they stopped between Saphira and the Harmonica kid 'Ahhh.' sighed Dr. Zee 'Cell 00100100 your new home! you know the last three occupants all committed suicide.' he turned to Troy 'Now in there on your bed is a uniform go in and get changed and try to make some friends Okay?' Troy nodded and went inside "The cow wants a curry pronto." said Raze Troy had no idea what that meant 'You know Raze I think you're the crazy one.' he told the voice. inside the room was a bed, a locker, a desk and chair and a small shelf. Resting on the bed was a light Blue set of clothes like what the other patients wore and a set of flimsy white slip-ons. Troy took off his clothes and replaced them with the uniform except for the shoes he was putting his own black and gold skate shoes back on and did the same with his leather jacket slipping it over the thin blue t-shirt. after he was done he went back to his Dad and Dr. Zee 'Well I think that's about all there is to go through.' Dr. Zee laughed 'Well say bye bye to daddy and try making friends with some of the more sane people here okay?' Troy looked at his father and embraced him. Then he turned towards the corridor full of insane misfits and decided that maybe it wouldn't be THAT bad at the Cray Zee institute.

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