Never Alone
This is my NaNoWriMo, which Kenzie has been begging me to write for a while now. This is not going to be done by the end of November, but I'm overall pretty happy with the story line. Especially from me, as I haven't had an original idea in... ever. I sort of got the idea from the songs Prayer by Hayley Westenra (It's beautiful! Look it up!) and Not Alone by Darren Criss.
Tell me whatcha think. ;)
Enjoy.
Chapter 1
Introduction
You're not alone. You're never alone. You may feel like you're alone, but there is always someone watching over you.
Someone always protects you, guides you, loves you. Someone will always go to the ends of the earth to protect you. They will take the bullet for you. They will accept your pain and sorrow without complaint.
You are not shut out from the world. There is always someone who shares your hobbies, your fears, your loves.
You may not see them, hear them, or feel them, but they are there, waiting to catch you when you fall.
Is that thought not comforting? Even if you are the last man on the planet, you are not alone. For these are not men.
You don't need love to survive. You don't even need friends or family to survive. People fall in and out of love, friendships spoil, and family separates.
Not your protectors. They would never dare to leave your side. They'll remain with you for all of eternity, through thick and thin, through the highs and the lows, even through death.
They are forever, and can do unspeakable magic when their Holder is in danger. Most people don't notice them until death.
Our protectors will greet us and embrace us as old friends, even if we do not recognize them. They love us unconditionally, even if we curse their name, spit in their face, and leave them bruised and broken. Their love is something we ignorant humans can't even comprehend. Our finite minds would explode.
Their caring, their charity, and their sheer power leaves those who realize their presence awestruck.
Most remain unknown to their Holder, hidden in the shadows until death, but always watching. Others let their Holders discover them.
The minority of the minorities reveal themselves to their Holder. There are risks, risks so horrible most do not even consider the option.
Most die instantly. The unlucky ones fall ill and remain in torture for a few days.
This is the worst failure for our protectors, as their main point is to protect us and ward off evil and sickness.
Only one had their protector revealed to them and lived.
Molly Emily Blanchard, a small, mousy, teenaged girl. She and her guardian live together to this day, unaffected by time.
Molly's auburn hair remains the same through sixty years, her deep brown eyes still clear and smooth. Age fourteen for sixty years, as if frozen in time.
This is the account of Molly Blanchard and her guardian angel.
Someone always protects you, guides you, loves you. Someone will always go to the ends of the earth to protect you. They will take the bullet for you. They will accept your pain and sorrow without complaint.
You are not shut out from the world. There is always someone who shares your hobbies, your fears, your loves.
You may not see them, hear them, or feel them, but they are there, waiting to catch you when you fall.
Is that thought not comforting? Even if you are the last man on the planet, you are not alone. For these are not men.
You don't need love to survive. You don't even need friends or family to survive. People fall in and out of love, friendships spoil, and family separates.
Not your protectors. They would never dare to leave your side. They'll remain with you for all of eternity, through thick and thin, through the highs and the lows, even through death.
They are forever, and can do unspeakable magic when their Holder is in danger. Most people don't notice them until death.
Our protectors will greet us and embrace us as old friends, even if we do not recognize them. They love us unconditionally, even if we curse their name, spit in their face, and leave them bruised and broken. Their love is something we ignorant humans can't even comprehend. Our finite minds would explode.
Their caring, their charity, and their sheer power leaves those who realize their presence awestruck.
Most remain unknown to their Holder, hidden in the shadows until death, but always watching. Others let their Holders discover them.
The minority of the minorities reveal themselves to their Holder. There are risks, risks so horrible most do not even consider the option.
Most die instantly. The unlucky ones fall ill and remain in torture for a few days.
This is the worst failure for our protectors, as their main point is to protect us and ward off evil and sickness.
Only one had their protector revealed to them and lived.
Molly Emily Blanchard, a small, mousy, teenaged girl. She and her guardian live together to this day, unaffected by time.
Molly's auburn hair remains the same through sixty years, her deep brown eyes still clear and smooth. Age fourteen for sixty years, as if frozen in time.
This is the account of Molly Blanchard and her guardian angel.



11 Comments
Amazing, like usual :D YEAH 1st COMMENT!!!!!!!!
O MY GOSH THIS SOUNDS AMAZING!!!
Amazing!!!!!
eyes very wide
REALLY SUPER FLIPPIN AMAZING,PLLEASE CONTINUE!!
Wow! Love it!
Make more!!!! This is Great!!! I wwant to see this in my messages everyday!!!! I WILL read this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Amazing!!!! I love it!
I love it GraceAnne! :D
But please can I give you a slight tip to make my reading more enjoyable? Make sure you don't switch between tenses, and stick to the present. I noticed that you wrote quite a few errors including this one:
Still seeming slightly dissatisfied with the fact that Molly had, in fact, been paying attention, Ms. Javez went back to the front of the room, her heels clicking against the floor.
Molly sighs with relief, and continues her hopeless and absentminded doodling.
Went and sighs are of different tenses.
It should either be: went and sighed
Or: goes and sighs
Shit. I know, I'm trying to keep it in the present tense, but it isn't always very easy. I'll keep my eye out for more typos, Katie. Keep pointin' 'em out, and I'll try to fix them.
That's okay! (:
I usually write in the present tense, so it is hard for me to write in the past tense now. I guess that is the same for you, but the other way around! :D