A Poem (please read)
my first poem so bare with me lolx i just rlly felt like getting thiz out and wat better way to get your feelingz of sadness out than through a poem!
comment and rate if you think it was good (wel evn if itz not good comment) btw it's true everything on it is true
I've been thinking
About friends
Who are the real ones?
I've asked myself this question
Many times before
The answer was always easy
But now I'm not so sure
I feel so alone
If you were about to snap a pic
Of all the girls in class
And I was not there
Would you look for me?
No
If a different girl was not there
Would you look for them?
Yes
I feel as though my friends aren't friends
Yes, we talk sometimes
But how often?
If you have a plan
You do not speak of it to me
Did I do something wrong?
What can I do
To have my friends back
The ones outside of school
Can never come and play
The ones at school
I have already explained
I feel more attached to seventh graders
Than I do to eighth
Who have I known longer?
Eighth graders
Should I feel the way I do?
No
If I don't feel happy
Do you know?
Probably not
If another eighth grader feels unhappy
Do you know?
Yes
Who chooses to sit next to me?
To talk and be with me?
No one
Especially if it's just me
I am chosen last
No one cares
I feel alone
And I've been thinking
About friends
Who are the real ones?
About friends
Who are the real ones?
I've asked myself this question
Many times before
The answer was always easy
But now I'm not so sure
I feel so alone
If you were about to snap a pic
Of all the girls in class
And I was not there
Would you look for me?
No
If a different girl was not there
Would you look for them?
Yes
I feel as though my friends aren't friends
Yes, we talk sometimes
But how often?
If you have a plan
You do not speak of it to me
Did I do something wrong?
What can I do
To have my friends back
The ones outside of school
Can never come and play
The ones at school
I have already explained
I feel more attached to seventh graders
Than I do to eighth
Who have I known longer?
Eighth graders
Should I feel the way I do?
No
If I don't feel happy
Do you know?
Probably not
If another eighth grader feels unhappy
Do you know?
Yes
Who chooses to sit next to me?
To talk and be with me?
No one
Especially if it's just me
I am chosen last
No one cares
I feel alone
And I've been thinking
About friends
Who are the real ones?
28 Comments
this sounds so sad. but it's a nice poem.
ya itz the way i feel :/ but thnx :]
sorry that you feel like that. it was a beautiful poem though.
thnx
Awww sad. But it's a great poem!
thnx :]
Definitely a great poem. You have a skill. :) sorry about all of this. People are ridiculous sometimes, aren't they? Just keep on goin'. You'll make it through. :)
thnx! :]
I know exactly how you feel. But, sometimes being alone can be a good thing. I'm a freshman at an early college high school, and im the youngest one here. its been three months into school and I still eat lunch and walk to my classes alone. Gives me a lot of tiem to think though. :/ just hang in becuz it does get better if the worst is here..
aw :( ya i hate being alone tho thatz the problem :/
sad and meaningful poem...i love it!!!!
thnx :]
awww thats sad :( but i know how u feel btw the poems really good!!!!
thnk shoez :]
that's a good poem! Sorry ya feel that way though!
thankiez :]
Aw that was sad but nicely-written! Nice job. I hope everything is really okay with your friends though...
thnx :] but no itz not sadly i rlly feel abandoned one of my best friendz like nvr hangz out wit me anymor...but i suppose i saw that comin i mean her bezt friend waz first letz say D cuz her name startz wit D thn they got in a fight and wer mad now r just friendz thn she became my bezt friend and A (name startz wit A) came to b her best friend az wel along wit me...wel we wer the BFF trio thn that kinda died ans itz just M and A now so i became mor of a BFF wit E thn E and D (yez same D)...
wer kinda fighting and wen i say that i mean E thot D waz annoying and D thot E waz ignoring her so naturally being the nice person i am i helped thm sort out thr problemz evn tho they got mad wen i did try to help and now E and D r BFFz E stil txtz me and chatz me a lot but we dont comunicate like at all in life...so now whoz left? G, Des and Den (first three lettrz of namez ha) Den iz my friend but evryone luvz her shez new i dont need to explain G iz pretty great friendz wit M and Des iz...
like my BFFL now but ya no she stil stikz wit the whole 8th grade gurlz group but I think she likez me quite a lot usually i hav 2 sit wit her cuz evryone elze haz thr seat buddiez (az i explained above) but bak to Den shez like my BFF dont get me rong but i dont get to hang wit her much cuz shez very into the 8th grade girlz groupnezz az wel so basically Des and Den r the same BFFz but they hang wit the group mozt of the time so im not thr cuz no one carez to find me...
btw u dont hav 2 read all that itz just anothr good way 4 me 2 get my feelingz out
Ya.. It gets to be a bit much after a while.. Sometimes there is a such thing as independence