Fallen
Okay I am doing this for SkyWings because she inspired me!Note to SkyWings:Use Trinidad if you want in you stories.
I was falling,faster and faster,the groung hurtuling towards me at terrifying speeds.I jolted upward sweat drenching my body only one though on my mind,why did that dream keep happening.I looked at the barren ophanage walls and sighed,the feeling that something was missing had come back.I felt it like a deep,constant,throbing pain in my chest. I took a deep breath and though about what the doctor said,make a list of important facts.1.My name is Trinidad Fell,2.I am an orphan,3. I am 16,4. I must escape. After that exersize I got out of the little cot and walked into the small bathroom that I shared with my in-mates,I mean room mates.I turned on the light and that feeling that someting was missing hit me again.I walked over to the mirror and stared at the face looking back at me,the girl had long deep brown hair,purpuly blue eyes.Something was missing here too,the space above her shoulders was empty.But wait that wasn't just any girl,that girl is me.
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Hey SkyWings
I have made it.
So what do you
think?
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Hey SkyWings
I have made it.
So what do you
think?
27 Comments
It's actually good! Are you going to write more? :)
I LOVE IT! XD This is soooo awsome. I can tell this story is going to be awsome.
It's still really good. You should send the net chapter to me when you have it up!:)
Love it! I totaly added it to my faves. :D
Thank you! I never though that some one would put any of my storys in their favs
Awesome!
MORE MORE MOREEE! pwease =)
cool. it kinda reminds me of the book im writing, b/c my girl is an orphan, too. but she's adopted.
MOWE. MOWE. MOWE. Phillip Pablo Collin Breakfast Julia the 5thandahalf wants MOWE.
I love thr 3rd chapter, I can't wait to read more about Alex! ;)
OMG!!! epicness!!
ps. here r some spelling corrections:
(not to be pompous. :) )
hurtling
throbbing
exercise
purply (I think.)
BTW awseome story!! mysterious much??
Sorry about the spelling(I suck at it but you understand what I'm getting at,right?)