Horse Girls

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Chapter 1

What Happened

Once upon a time there were three girls that loved horses. They were always talking about them and how they would get one someday. Then when reality hit and one of those girls actually got one the other two got dangerously jealous. The two girls' names are Caitlin and Jackalynn, but she goes buy Jackie. They started ignoring Megan. Megan was very sad about her loss of friends but at least she has on more new friend. Her horse Mary. She is named Mary because of her magical power. Her power is that if Megan ever felt sad or depressed Mary would know. Whenever that happened Mary would always try to comfort her owner.Megan thought that Mary would be the perfect name for her horse.

When Megan was bored and wanted to talk to someone she tried calling her friends, but instead of picking up they didn't even bother looking at the phone.Megan decides since her friends aren't picking up there phones she might as well just go over there to try to talk to them.

She goes to the stables saddles up Mary and rides over to Jackie's house. When Megan got there Jackie's mom answered the door. Megan asked if she could talk to Jackie... Jackie's mom said " I'm sorry, but she isn't in I think she is with Caitlin right now..." Megan said " Oh. So do you think that they would both be over at Caitlin's house then?" Jackie's mom said "Yeah maybe..." she lied. Megan said "Okay thank you.."

Megan got back on Mary, and rode off towards Caitlin's house. When she got there once again Caitlin's mom answered the door. Megan asked if she could talk to Caitlin. Caitlin's mom said "Caitlin and Jackie went to a movie I'm sorry I will tell her that you visited." Megan said "No. Its okay um don't mention that I even visited. "Caitlin's mom said "Okay. This little chat will stay between us." Megan said "Thank you."Megan got back on Mary, and rode off in to the horizon.

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