ripped wings
raven (me) is a gothic chic with a ripped out heart. She thinks that there is nothing else to live for. but the handsome goth Jay tries to stop raven from killing herself. oh and Raven's fauther beats her. ;(
Raven pov
i hate it here ever since mom died dad hasn't been the same. he kepts bring different women in the family, thinking that they would repair the hole in our hearts. dad moved use all the way to califorina. he thinks its good for the skin, maybe i like being goth.
end of raven's pov
next morning, frist day of school. daven was walking around the school trying to find roon 625. when a boy ran right into her.
Watch it. said the boy
don't have to it's a free country. said raven
the boy looks at ravens face, and realize that raven was the new id everyone was talking about.
Hey your the new kid. said the boy
so. said raven
will everyone talking about you, like you the new freak.said the boy
And why woould they do theat? asked raven
For one thing you a goth, your new, and everyone at this school is tan, well except me and v. said the boy
and you are? asked raven
Jay. said jay
Raven. said raven
raven and jay walk out of the front doors of the school. and layed down on the grass next to the big oak tree.
So whats a girl for missouri doing in califorina? asked jay
Mom died, dad wanted a new start. said raven
a girl wearing a black mini, a black and red ripped tank, fishnet stchoking, and combat boots ran all the way to the oak tre scream something off of the top of her lungs. Raven and jay covered their ears.
V, calm down. said Jay
V was hyperventalating.
V, breathe, in, out, in, out. said Jay
It took a few secounds for v to regain her breath.
Hi, I'm Victoria, but i like V better. said V
Hey, Raven. said raven
Wait you mean like the new girl raven or the bird raven? asked V
Both I think. said raven
Jay guess what. said v
What V it better be imortant. said jay
It is, so you know my cousin dave, well he is going for a little vaction and his beach hose is mine for the weekend. said v
Cool. said Jay
Do you know what this means? asked v
Goths getting drunk, high.. said jay
Raven chuckled.
Yes and no, it means that we could have a party. said v
Nice. said jay
when? asked raven
This weekend. said v
I'll see if i can come. said raven.
the bell for school to be ou just rang. a bunch of people came rusing out of school.
Raven, do you need a ride home? aksed Jay
Sure. said raven
V, ran off the give a buch of goth kids with tans some flyers. Raven and jay walk tto Jay's black convertable.
Nice car. said raven
i hate it here ever since mom died dad hasn't been the same. he kepts bring different women in the family, thinking that they would repair the hole in our hearts. dad moved use all the way to califorina. he thinks its good for the skin, maybe i like being goth.
end of raven's pov
next morning, frist day of school. daven was walking around the school trying to find roon 625. when a boy ran right into her.
Watch it. said the boy
don't have to it's a free country. said raven
the boy looks at ravens face, and realize that raven was the new id everyone was talking about.
Hey your the new kid. said the boy
so. said raven
will everyone talking about you, like you the new freak.said the boy
And why woould they do theat? asked raven
For one thing you a goth, your new, and everyone at this school is tan, well except me and v. said the boy
and you are? asked raven
Jay. said jay
Raven. said raven
raven and jay walk out of the front doors of the school. and layed down on the grass next to the big oak tree.
So whats a girl for missouri doing in califorina? asked jay
Mom died, dad wanted a new start. said raven
a girl wearing a black mini, a black and red ripped tank, fishnet stchoking, and combat boots ran all the way to the oak tre scream something off of the top of her lungs. Raven and jay covered their ears.
V, calm down. said Jay
V was hyperventalating.
V, breathe, in, out, in, out. said Jay
It took a few secounds for v to regain her breath.
Hi, I'm Victoria, but i like V better. said V
Hey, Raven. said raven
Wait you mean like the new girl raven or the bird raven? asked V
Both I think. said raven
Jay guess what. said v
What V it better be imortant. said jay
It is, so you know my cousin dave, well he is going for a little vaction and his beach hose is mine for the weekend. said v
Cool. said Jay
Do you know what this means? asked v
Goths getting drunk, high.. said jay
Raven chuckled.
Yes and no, it means that we could have a party. said v
Nice. said jay
when? asked raven
This weekend. said v
I'll see if i can come. said raven.
the bell for school to be ou just rang. a bunch of people came rusing out of school.
Raven, do you need a ride home? aksed Jay
Sure. said raven
V, ran off the give a buch of goth kids with tans some flyers. Raven and jay walk tto Jay's black convertable.
Nice car. said raven
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