THIS IS SO IMPORTANT THAT IF YPU DON'T READ, THE WORLD WILL END!
I'm only joking!XD
But I do want you all to read because I'm writing this story which I hope to get published one day ... PLEASE READ BELOW!
Im writing a story called "Lucy : The spheres of power" and I want you all to comment and rate on it... Please? It would mean everything to get your feed back!:)
So, do you want the plot? Ah, but of coarse you do!XD
Lucy is just your average teen age kid- going to school, getting crushes and having one or two mood swings. Yup, just an average teenager.
That was until the day her friends persuaded her to ditch school. She thought nothing of it until they were almost caught and ran into a garden of your everyday house. But- when that door opens, secrets are revealed. Lucy and her friends must find Three Golden spheres as to let what's inside go free.
Can Lucy do it? Find out if you read.
Great story! Perfect for teens to read!
-The daily prophet!
Sorry, couldn't help myself!!! So please do comment and rate when I send the next chapter out, which should be out later tonight.
Oh also, my Hogwarts love story will also be written tonight? I WONDER WHAT SEAMUS WILL ASK HER? Or- will he even ask her?:0 haha :)
-Rose
So, do you want the plot? Ah, but of coarse you do!XD
Lucy is just your average teen age kid- going to school, getting crushes and having one or two mood swings. Yup, just an average teenager.
That was until the day her friends persuaded her to ditch school. She thought nothing of it until they were almost caught and ran into a garden of your everyday house. But- when that door opens, secrets are revealed. Lucy and her friends must find Three Golden spheres as to let what's inside go free.
Can Lucy do it? Find out if you read.
Great story! Perfect for teens to read!
-The daily prophet!
Sorry, couldn't help myself!!! So please do comment and rate when I send the next chapter out, which should be out later tonight.
Oh also, my Hogwarts love story will also be written tonight? I WONDER WHAT SEAMUS WILL ASK HER? Or- will he even ask her?:0 haha :)
-Rose
25 Comments
If you want it to get published, make sure you don't switch point of views if it's written in first person. It is very annoying, and you will only fail in deciphering the way a male's brain works; honestly who has met an overly lovestruck boy? It's just pathetic.
No. It's all in lucy's view. I also hate when people change point of views
-I mean. I've done it once and I hated it! The stories should just stick to one person... Like Harry potter!XD
Did you know that could be offensive? To someone who does change point of veiws? Me perhapse? Because I find that very offensive. I work hard on my story and you call it garbage because because I like to change the point of veiw every once in a while. Did you know that that is a ver good way of keeping readers satisfied because they know something the character doesn't. So if you want to call me pathetic; acctually think first.
Well, have I ever read your story? I didn't even say it was garbage. I said it was annoying. It's my opinion, so deal with it. Now go cry and rant about me in your story, 'kay? You want me to call you pathetic? All right; you're pathetic.
But if you only stick to one person's point of view you'll always wonder what others were thinking during certain things won't you? I'm also writing to say good luck on your story and to please don't send it to me because I didn't like the plot so it's more than likely I won't read it. (no offense, just being honest(.
Ttyl prong
Thanks for the honest opinion. But, there's other books I plan on writing.
The first one being Lucy because she was the one I came up with first.
Then Alex
Then Alic
And finally Conner.
All of them have different plots to their stories i.e. Alice's one is called Alice : chains of a vampire
But thanks again for your opinion and also, I click send to veryone so just delete it when I send it. Unless you want to give it a chance...? XD
U could always write in 3rd person! like harry potter, but I'll read ur story
I hate writing in third persons.. It really confuses me! But your right! I could try! I have the first chapter finished already which is basically the intro!XD ha
I'll read it!!
I'll keep that on mind thanks.
No problem!:)
:)
Sounds like a great story!
Ik! just got and about 2 read it!
Umm in Harry Potter its a 3rd person POV so they do change it like in number 4 they used it for when the cartaker died. In the first one they did it in the very beginning same with the 6th.
and it is very offensive for people who write in other POV's and actually its very good because it shows what else is going on. Lurlene McDaniel one of the best authors ever wrote in different POV's for Hit and Run. Its very ignorant of you to say that.
It's not offensive unless you make it out to be an offense.
I know Harry potter is in 3rd person. I read every single book... But! It only points into one person... HARRY? it never shows what Ron and hermione are thinking does it? I never said I didn't like reading third views or different pov. I just don't like wriing them, that's all. :)
OKAY OKAY I'LL READ IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD
I don't want the worked to end lol