You Can Thrill Her
This is the first story in the "You Can Thrill..." series!
Enjoy!
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I hope you like it if you read it!
Chapter 1
Go?
It was a Friday afternoon. Christain just wanted to go to the park with his sister. But he and his sister were all of the sudden not allowed to go to the park. Christain didn't know why. All he knew was his parents thought it wasn't safe to go outside on that Friday afternoon!
Christain cried to his mother, he was just so sad. His sister cried too.
Then there came a flock of geese running towards them.
Christina, Christain's sister, wanted to run away from the geese but it was too late. The geese knocked her over. "Just my luck!" She said sarcasticly.
"Are you okay, Christina?" Jamie yelled. Jamie had a crush on Christain for quite some time. Ever since she thought Christain had funny jokes, she liked him...
Christain cried to his mother, he was just so sad. His sister cried too.
Then there came a flock of geese running towards them.
Christina, Christain's sister, wanted to run away from the geese but it was too late. The geese knocked her over. "Just my luck!" She said sarcasticly.
"Are you okay, Christina?" Jamie yelled. Jamie had a crush on Christain for quite some time. Ever since she thought Christain had funny jokes, she liked him...



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i liked the 2nd chapter too....write more
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