Why Must You Screw With The Coolest Anime Ever? (Angsty-type Naruto FanFic Rants)
Just a few rants. Anything your ticked off about in fanfics? Send me a message or a comment and I'll do a little segment on it.
Not meant to offend. Just venting.
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Yeah. . . So, When I Was Reading This, I Found A Major Flaw In Your Character
by Keys_Locket
Yeah. . . So, When I Was Reading This, I Found A Major Flaw In Your Character
by Keys_Locket
I don't care if your Oc is his long lost best friend, adopted sister, or an arch enemy. That whole "love at first sight" thing doesn't work for Sasuke.
Since when have you even seen hims smile? Aside from that cocky smirk that he usually gives and when he's younger. I'm talking about 12/13 year old Sasuke and above.
Three things about him:
Cold? Yes
Indifferent? Yes
Will he give a damn if you fall off a bridge? Depends on your relationship, but mostlikly no.
Not trying to anger any of you guys here, but people are seriously screwing with Sasuke's personality. If you want to add some type of hidden emotion, that's fine. Going into full detail about it is a no no. I don't think Sasuke's that open.
For example, take a look at this peice.
For some reason, I couldn't get her magestic smile out of my head. The way she laughs luike there's not a care in the world. It gives me a sense of peace. even with her indescisive attitude. She astounds me either way.
No!
I, personally, like writting angsty stuff. Therefore, writing in Sasuke's PoV isn't very challenging to me, unless you wanna show love.
ex. My brows pulled together as I watched the two dobes. Flailing there arms, singing a song about frogs. I starred blankly at them. What the hell?
Eh, that was just randomness for my amusement. Now, let's get serious.
My fist made contact with the cold stone walls that surrounded me. This was her fault. It all was. I stared at my hands in pure frustration. It was agonizing knowing that I couldn't do anything about this . . . feeling. I just wanted to get rid of it, get back to my training. But it's hard to fight when her face keeps showing in every direction, leading me back into that eerie silence where we once stood together. I cursed at myself. She was impossible to escape.
That may have sucked. Like I said, getting Sasuke to fall in love is hard, but don't make him go OOC on us!
Make them spar, eat at Ichiraku's, or make Sasuke just so hapen to not be an azz and walk her home. Build the relashionship, then add Sasuke's personal feelings.
Maybe he first feels denial and starts being cold to her? Then anger because she's a distraction from his goal? Something along the lines of that.
I know I don't write the perfect Naruto fanfics but that doesn't mean that some should go unnoticed just because of OOCness.
So, this is just a little reminder for all you Narutards, never, I repeat, never make Sasuke fall in love easily or else I will get Beyond to stalk you.
Caio!
Since when have you even seen hims smile? Aside from that cocky smirk that he usually gives and when he's younger. I'm talking about 12/13 year old Sasuke and above.
Three things about him:
Cold? Yes
Indifferent? Yes
Will he give a damn if you fall off a bridge? Depends on your relationship, but mostlikly no.
Not trying to anger any of you guys here, but people are seriously screwing with Sasuke's personality. If you want to add some type of hidden emotion, that's fine. Going into full detail about it is a no no. I don't think Sasuke's that open.
For example, take a look at this peice.
For some reason, I couldn't get her magestic smile out of my head. The way she laughs luike there's not a care in the world. It gives me a sense of peace. even with her indescisive attitude. She astounds me either way.
No!
I, personally, like writting angsty stuff. Therefore, writing in Sasuke's PoV isn't very challenging to me, unless you wanna show love.
ex. My brows pulled together as I watched the two dobes. Flailing there arms, singing a song about frogs. I starred blankly at them. What the hell?
Eh, that was just randomness for my amusement. Now, let's get serious.
My fist made contact with the cold stone walls that surrounded me. This was her fault. It all was. I stared at my hands in pure frustration. It was agonizing knowing that I couldn't do anything about this . . . feeling. I just wanted to get rid of it, get back to my training. But it's hard to fight when her face keeps showing in every direction, leading me back into that eerie silence where we once stood together. I cursed at myself. She was impossible to escape.
That may have sucked. Like I said, getting Sasuke to fall in love is hard, but don't make him go OOC on us!
Make them spar, eat at Ichiraku's, or make Sasuke just so hapen to not be an azz and walk her home. Build the relashionship, then add Sasuke's personal feelings.
Maybe he first feels denial and starts being cold to her? Then anger because she's a distraction from his goal? Something along the lines of that.
I know I don't write the perfect Naruto fanfics but that doesn't mean that some should go unnoticed just because of OOCness.
So, this is just a little reminder for all you Narutards, never, I repeat, never make Sasuke fall in love easily or else I will get Beyond to stalk you.
Caio!
11 Comments
Well said, well said. I mean, seriously. Whenever I read a fanfic about Sasuke falling in love, I try to smash the computer (unless it's Vixen's or your stories, of course). Since when did Sasuke ever become so...loving? He's MADE OF STONE, basically. You notice how he almost never smiles, unless he gives you that arrogant, cocky grin? Seriously, people. SASUKE'S LIFE WAS HELL. HE WILL NOT GIVE A DAMN ABOUT SOME RANDOM KUNOICHI.
That's all I have to say. Ranting is so fun sometimes. :P
XD Totally love your point, Annamay. ;D
You're talking about my story, aren't you?
Well, first of all, Sasuke already loved Misaki when they were kids, and now that they are more grown up, their feelings start to mature towards love.
But, whatever. I think it'd be fun to see a different side of Sasuke, like in my story.
But, everyone has their opinion.
Thanks.
~~~Vixen~~~
No I'm not, but your story did come into mind while I was writing this.
I've already told you the few things about your story that I dislike. There's honestly nothing else, but I do have a huge pet peeve about people throwing off Sasuke's personality. I mean, ho are you going to have a Sasuke love story that's not violent, suspenseful, and angsty?
Plus, after Itachi killed the clan, Sasuke pretty much (attempted) to cut off all emotion.
(cont.)
If that's the case, then how come that thread, or rope size bond means so much? All I'm saying is that I don't see it as a Sasuke love story without the suspense and complications.
Still, an opinion is just an opinion. Everyone has different tastes.
You do have a point, but since they were childhood friends, he's not made of stone around Misaki. He actually cares about her, because she was there when the Massacre happened and everything. She's been through a lot of hard things with Sasuke.
I understand if you dislike my story because of the way I'm depicting Sasuke, then you don't have to read it.
Thanks for your opinion. (:
wow, my story is exactly like this xD i never even realized these things, but now that i look back them, i completely understand u! Im might start a new story following your opinion, but then again, i only kno naruto from the episodes i watched with my childhood friends and the ones my sister watches so i don't kno all the little bity details.
Thanks for your opinions tho, they're rally true and help too =)
You're welcome!
That's just what I'm trying to do. Plus, I'm a total Naruto fanatic and hate to see a good fanfic go under appreciated because of a few missing details.
Point noted. :)
Amen!!! Sorry I hate sakura and don't like Hinata. Did I do that? I mean is my naruto fan-fic that bad?
scratches neck nervously
Hehe . . . maybe.
I suggest just going back to edit the story. This is just my opinion though. I guess I'm just more used to seeing capitalization, italics when in thought or fashbacks, and more description. But everybody has there own style =^-^=