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1) The story doesn't have to be finished
2) I'll review fanfics as best I can. I like Twilight, so that'll be my strong point.
3) All reviews will have their own personal chapter in this story.
4) I'll also put messages/advertisments by the author.
5) It doesn't have to be your story, just recommend it!
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Overall Rating: 4.5/5
This story is based on the series "Avatar, the Last Airbender", only in modern form. It takes place in Evercraft City, where military troops try to track down a shadow figure. No one gets a hold on it, though. No one knows what it is... yet.
Chandler uses complex military terms and specifics often, so the only critisism I have is that if you have no idea about the military, you may get lost. I'd like to see a little more explanations on the terms. I love the formality of the story, don't get me wrong, but like I said. Anyone who doesn't have an interest in military education may need a little more help understanding.
On a lighter note, I absolutely love the action. The suspense is wonderful. I would highly recommend this story to my friends.
You can read "Hunted - A Modern Avatar Story" at the link below!
http://www.quibblo.com/quiz/foU02M6/Hunted-A-Modern-Avatar-Story
This story is based on the series "Avatar, the Last Airbender", only in modern form. It takes place in Evercraft City, where military troops try to track down a shadow figure. No one gets a hold on it, though. No one knows what it is... yet.
Chandler uses complex military terms and specifics often, so the only critisism I have is that if you have no idea about the military, you may get lost. I'd like to see a little more explanations on the terms. I love the formality of the story, don't get me wrong, but like I said. Anyone who doesn't have an interest in military education may need a little more help understanding.
On a lighter note, I absolutely love the action. The suspense is wonderful. I would highly recommend this story to my friends.
You can read "Hunted - A Modern Avatar Story" at the link below!
http://www.quibblo.com/quiz/foU02M6/Hunted-A-Modern-Avatar-Story
16 Comments
I would like to recommend my story Hunted, please.
No problem, I'll get right on it!
Thank you. :)
Alright, it's done :-) Sorry it's so short.
I would feel selfish recommending my own story, so I'll recommend The Following Year by Quizgirl912 !
lol, great!
Okay! xD Good luck!
i recomend Pirate Blood Never Runs Shallow by Emmatrix_Less_Strange
also one by me My Wonderland cuz itz for a contest so i wud LUV a review on it :)
thankiez! ^_^
I recommend a few stories:
1. The Girl is Mine by TeamJacobLuvsMj (me)
2. Before You Judge Me, Try Hard to Love Me by KeyKeynMJ
3. Devil's Bite by feonikks
4. Hate is a Passionate Emotion by love_danny
5. And lastly, another one by me, Sometime Bad Things Happen to Good People (I think that's what it's called, lol) XD
I think you should review:
1. The Art of Danger by Tired_Of_Deleters.
http://www.quibblo.com/quiz/flwVEJL/The-Art-Of-Danger
2. Diary of a Crazy by Im_not_short_Im_fun_size http://www.quibblo.com/quiz/fJP2zSI/Diary-of-a-Crazy
3. The Heroes of the Lost by Totally_Adorkable_xD http://www.quibblo.com/quiz/fPtJbU_/The-Heroes-of-the-Lost
4. The Forest Spirits by me
http://www.quibblo.com/quiz/frGjsby/The-Forest-Spirits
5. Sapphire Saving the World One Step at a Time Starting With Her Own LIfe by Muffinz_Girl
http://www.quibblo.com/quiz/fNZqirK/Sapphire-Saving-the-World-One-Step-at-a-Time-Starting-with-Her-Own-Life
6. Change by JohnChristopherDeppII
http://www.quibblo.com/quiz/fu2olsY/Change?story_chapter=1
http://www.quibblo.com/quiz/fB_pbvl/Bagels-and-GingerFred-Weasley-LovestoryWritingfanatics-contest
That's my story!
Hi! I'm a Hunger Games fan-fic addict, so here are some of them that I'd like for you to review:
Three Girls, Different Worlds by CuPpYcAkEs898, Lovelyannemarie, and me.
To Be A Career by Lovelyannemarie (This story is finished)
How I Went Insane by CuPpYcAkEs898
Cato by Lovelyannemarie
Blood, Betrayals, and Berries by CuPpYcAkEs898
I wonder if someone will recommend mine... XD Oh well, I can dream.
Darnnit, I always thought my idea of Avatar in modern times was original. XD
Hey , Can You Read My Two Stories? They Are In Quiz Form , They Are Called: Twilight Spoof/Love Story Part 1
Twilight Spoof/Love Story. Part 2
So Yeah , If You Could Read Them And Right A Review... That Be Kinda....EPIC... Thanks!