It (for BrokenSmiles's contest)
Erm, this is my first poem, so please tell me if it's any good, although I know it sucks! o_O
It was there for me, and I was it.
We were friends, but one day that changed.
It scared me, just a little bit.
When it dropped to my feet,
I wondered where it came from.
I thought it was really neat.
Now I see behind it's porclain skin.
Whatever it was, it was strange.
Mist poured out its mouth, at first very thin.
Then, the green gas got very thick.
It looked almost human.
The process was very quick.
The once-was doll stared into me:
It flew into me.
The ghost was free.
We were friends, but one day that changed.
It scared me, just a little bit.
When it dropped to my feet,
I wondered where it came from.
I thought it was really neat.
Now I see behind it's porclain skin.
Whatever it was, it was strange.
Mist poured out its mouth, at first very thin.
Then, the green gas got very thick.
It looked almost human.
The process was very quick.
The once-was doll stared into me:
It flew into me.
The ghost was free.
10 Comments
whoa. I like it!!! xD
its good, but a little weird o.0 i like it :]
i just read a book where a gost was trapped in a doll, so thats where it came from :)
What did you read?
BrokenDreams?
oops... im REALLY bad with remembering names! sorry! imma go change it now...
'Tis fine.
This does not suck! It's good :) I like it!
LOVE IT!!!
ooh creepy D: haha i like it though :)