Intruder
Here's a story I randomly wrote when I was bored one day, enjoy.
Chapter 1
Ouch
"Renesmee? Renesmee? Are you okay?" called my mother, Bella. I wasn't really what one would call okay, but it would be alot worse if I wasn't half vampire. I felt dizzy, and I couldn't move. I heard my father, Edward, explained to my mother how I was. I tried to say something, but all that came out was a groan. "Call Carlisle." I heard my mother say, panicked. I got dizzier and dizzier and....
"Shh...your going to wake her up! She needs to sleep!" I heard Carlisle whisper. "To late, she's starting to wake up." said my father. "You see what you did, Rosalie?" complained Jacob, angrily. I heard a growl. I opened my eyes to see Jacob and Rosalie glaring at each other. "Guys don't fight." I mumbled. "Renesmee, I'm so sorry Rosalie woke you up. Oh, and did I mention it was Rosalie?" said Jacob. "Stop it, Jake, stop it." He sighed and gave up. "So do you remember who did this? What happened?" asked Rosalie as she helped me sit up. I tried to remember but I couldn't. Well, it felt more like I could if I really tried, but I just couldn't. It hurt to try, it gave me a headache! I looked at my dad, who could read minds. He shrugged. I looked at Rosalie and shook my head. Jacob came over and gently pushed me back down. "Maybe you should get some more rest." he said and kissed me on the forehead.
"Shh...your going to wake her up! She needs to sleep!" I heard Carlisle whisper. "To late, she's starting to wake up." said my father. "You see what you did, Rosalie?" complained Jacob, angrily. I heard a growl. I opened my eyes to see Jacob and Rosalie glaring at each other. "Guys don't fight." I mumbled. "Renesmee, I'm so sorry Rosalie woke you up. Oh, and did I mention it was Rosalie?" said Jacob. "Stop it, Jake, stop it." He sighed and gave up. "So do you remember who did this? What happened?" asked Rosalie as she helped me sit up. I tried to remember but I couldn't. Well, it felt more like I could if I really tried, but I just couldn't. It hurt to try, it gave me a headache! I looked at my dad, who could read minds. He shrugged. I looked at Rosalie and shook my head. Jacob came over and gently pushed me back down. "Maybe you should get some more rest." he said and kissed me on the forehead.



3 Comments
Aww this is sweet!! Interesting how you did it from Renesmees point of view . . . I like it write more please!!
Write more I lovee It!!!!
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