Shattered
this story is slightly based off of my recent break up......sooo umm....please just read. also please comment and rate,kk thanks.
xoxo becca
The cold November air was biting at my already cold nose. The cold air made my chest hurt even worse.
I flinched at the memories of last night...when my boyfriend,Corey,dumped me in a text. He shattered my heart when he said that he never loved me. But I shouldn't have dealt with it the way I did. I pulled up the sleeve of my hoodie and looked at the raw scars on my wrist. They ached,just like my shattered heart.
I pulled down my sleeve when I heard foot steps behind.
"Heyyy Becca." My two best friends,Griffin and Trey said.
"Hey guys." I said looking at my shoes. I really need a new pair.
"Becca,are you ok?" Griffin asked,concern in his voice.
"Not really,but who cares?"
"We care. What's wrong?"
I sighed,"Last night.........Corey....umm.....dumped me,in a text."
"Are you ok? Gawd........Becca,we're sooo sorry." Griffin said. Trey nodded in agreement. He was never really one to talk.
"Me to guys......me to.'
TBC..............................................
i hope u liked! please comment and rate!
xoxo Becca
I flinched at the memories of last night...when my boyfriend,Corey,dumped me in a text. He shattered my heart when he said that he never loved me. But I shouldn't have dealt with it the way I did. I pulled up the sleeve of my hoodie and looked at the raw scars on my wrist. They ached,just like my shattered heart.
I pulled down my sleeve when I heard foot steps behind.
"Heyyy Becca." My two best friends,Griffin and Trey said.
"Hey guys." I said looking at my shoes. I really need a new pair.
"Becca,are you ok?" Griffin asked,concern in his voice.
"Not really,but who cares?"
"We care. What's wrong?"
I sighed,"Last night.........Corey....umm.....dumped me,in a text."
"Are you ok? Gawd........Becca,we're sooo sorry." Griffin said. Trey nodded in agreement. He was never really one to talk.
"Me to guys......me to.'
TBC..............................................
i hope u liked! please comment and rate!
xoxo Becca
34 Comments
I found this a good way of how some people resort in negative ways to their problems, but the main character realized it was wrong. It is also a very good way to vent out your own feelings. Overall, I feel like I, as well as many others, can relate to it. Wonderful job and content! :)
Becca. you are a beautiful young lady. that means you're a princess. and one day, your prince will find you, the girl he's been waiting for all his life. he'll cry when he hears your stories of heartache and self-injury, it will break his heart. but that doesn't mean he'll leave you for it, because he'll respect you and love you, and cherish you all your life. wait for the right prince, Becca. and don't hurt yourself.. for him. you're worth so much more than a cut arm. it will get better :)
Really good! Your boyfriend Corey in real life is a _ and you deserve better!
yeah Beckz u deserve MUCH MUCH better hun....and i like ur story...
I like it. It shows the actual feelings on a person with a broken heart. Personally, I like the part where she's at your friends house. People could use time to get over the person that broke their heart. She'll find someone to love her for her and care for her when she's down. you should write something that gets her another guy. Forget about Corey, find someone to love. Personally, I think you should look at someone who has been by your side for a while, meaning her best friend. wink wink
My wife died on 11/22 of cancer... my best friend in life... my better half. I watched helplessly as she wasted away... starved to death with disease... I held her hand during her last breath... 11 of the best years of my life flashed before me...
This Corey guy is a waste of a second thought... if he said he never loved you! Personally, BebeGun above, I like her advice to you...:)
Too sweet! :D I'm glad she found someone!
aaahhhh mazing!!!!
iiiii looove iiit!!!!!!!!!!!
that so sad and sweet
:O COREY? THAT _ !!! LEAVE HER ALONE! And your writing is awesome, some grammatical mistakes, but I don't mind!