The heart that doesnt crack

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characters
Marie- main character/girl
John- a guy
Eric- a guy
Jan- Marie's best friend
Mr. Kich- teacher
Miss Rech- teacher
Mr. Polince- Jan's dad

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Chapter 1

If he was blind...

Marie is contiplating and chewing on the tip of her pencil when suddenly her phone vibrates. On the screen was a text from her ex-boyfriend, John. He asked Marie if there was homework for that night, which Marie replied with a Yes. Then her phone started ringing to the music of Rock That Body by black eyed peas with the part Fergie sings "Let go-oh-oh". It was john, of course.

"Hello?" Marie said. She really isn't in the mood to talk right now.
"Hey, Marie" John says.
"What do you want?" Marie asked. Its not like shes going to sit there breathing into the phone.
"Well, im having a party this weekend and just want to say, that you are invited! I will have tons of music, and people. And the best part... food and drinks!"
"Okay, and where is this party of yours located?" Marie needs and address, without one she cant attend it, of course.
"my house, 135 cherry tree road" John informed.
"Okay, bye" Then i looked at my phone, clicked the red button and hanged up.

John's party
Marie spots her best friend, Jan at the party.
"Jan! You got invited to?" Marie says excitingly.
"It seems so, May-May" Jan grins.
"Well, Well,Well" John says walking up behind us, getting in the middle and putting his arms on our shoulders. As willingly as she wanted to, she wanted his arm off. But it seems that she is not getting her way tonight.
"Hey" Jan says to John.
"You are soo nice. Unlike Marie over here on da'right" John laughed. "Girls nowadays"
"What does that supposed to mean?" Jan and Marie said about the same time.
"One girl is always nicer than the other if theres one guy hanging" He licked his lips.
"No!" Jan said, her thinking in the gutter. John gave an even wider smile.
"Im just going to head over there" Marie said to John and Jan, pointing to the mini homeade bar at his kitchen counter.

As Marie walked over to the homeade bar, she can see couples making out against the walls and making noise and calling eachothers names. Marie spotted at least 5 couples on my way to the homeade bar. Marie walked up to the kitchen counter where the bartender, which was really Ron whos a nerd, asked her what she wanted to drink.
"Ill have a glass of sprite, please" Marie said, in my polite and loud noise, for the fact the music was playing loud, and clear.
"Every soda has some kind of alcohol in it" Ron said, spitting on her face due to his braces. Marie hates talking to him, seriously.
"Well, i would like no alcohol" Marie said. She meant it.
"I cannot do. I was ordered specificly to give-" She interupted.
"I dont care, im not in the mood." She was getting angry.
"You will have to come and get it" Ron was teasing and spitting. Marie eventually started trying to grab the drink from his hands. Suddenly, some couple that were partially making out bumped into her making her fall forward, ending up kissing Ron. Luckily she stopped before it got into worse hands. Then she heard little giggles that turned into big laughs, and as they were laughing, Marie could feel my face getting redder with angriness each minuThen she turned and realized that John saw it and he had his flip fone. Thats why people were laughing. He sent the picture to everyone at the party.
Marie wished he was blind and didnt take that picture...

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