Emotionaly correct. Mentally helpless.

The dark trees cast ominous shadows over the herd of gazelles sleeping on the plain. Silence was only severed by the crickets chirping in the grass. A large snowy white moon illuminated the clear, dark sky. Slight rustling in the tall buffalo grass disturbed the silent african terrain.
Gazelles awakened and lifted their heads, fully alert of the world around them. A flash of gold flew from the grass and they scattered. The wild animal focused on a single gazelle and flew through the air, keen senses fully tuned. Gracefully the gazellle sprinted through the grass, but, in the excitement of the chase, stumbled over a fallen tree branch. Fearing for her life she attempted to regain speed, but the monster with the beautiful coat pounced and sunk it's teeth into the gazelles fur, tasting the sweetness of blood flow between her teeth.
The rest of the gazelle retreated to the trees and watched as the spotted beast feasted on their kin. Their sister.
Bones crunched and skin was being shredded. Blood was spilling everywhere, dying fur and staining teeth. Golden eyes feasted on the meat. The jaguar; Afrcas' greatest fear. When the meal was finished the large cat slinked back into the shadows and ambled off into the night, leaving the eyes of the lost to study the shredded body of their beloved friend.


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Hey, so this is kinda a trial chapter to, you know, see if I should continue with the story. Sorry for it being so...descriptive. I'm used to adding detail, especialy in parts like these. Sorrrryyyy!!!!!!!!!! There's probably going to be quite a few parts like this, so if you do like the story, but have a weak stomach and don't like all the detail, tell me. I could probably try to make some kind of signal or something to warn you. Or if, like, everyone could barely read it, just skip these parts all together :D