It Hurts (A Poem)~
Yeah... kind of making this up as I go. Bye.
Chapter 1
It Hurts
You're a stupid drunken bastard
that I never want to see again!
I'm glad you left my life early.
I'm glad I didn't have to go through
any more horrors.
But I was wrong. There's another.
He's even worse than you.
I only knew you for five years..
But oh shiit, it's true.
Don't really know why mom married him, though.
He hasn't got much dough.
He comes home drunk pretty much every night.
Sometimes he doesn't come home at all.
Those are the best nights.
Sometimes I hope that he got in a car accident.
It sounds cruel, I know.
But he's caused me so much pain.
Tell me, Dad.
Why does Mommy like men who hurt her?
Why is she so stupid like that?
Am I stupid like that, too?
Of course you don't know.
I haven't seen you for years now.
But I won't cry anymore tears now.
If you ever come crawling back,
I'll take my razor and force you to slit your wrists.
I'll see how you like it.
I'll show you what you did to me.
I'll make you feel the pain that you made me feel.
I'll get big men to beat you up. By "accident."
See how you feel.
But it's not just you.
It's also dad number two.
He's annoying as fhuck.
I already said he drinks a lot.
And gambles a lot.
And I already asked why mom likes guys
Like you two.
If I didn't have Harry,
I don't know what I'd do.
that I never want to see again!
I'm glad you left my life early.
I'm glad I didn't have to go through
any more horrors.
But I was wrong. There's another.
He's even worse than you.
I only knew you for five years..
But oh shiit, it's true.
Don't really know why mom married him, though.
He hasn't got much dough.
He comes home drunk pretty much every night.
Sometimes he doesn't come home at all.
Those are the best nights.
Sometimes I hope that he got in a car accident.
It sounds cruel, I know.
But he's caused me so much pain.
Tell me, Dad.
Why does Mommy like men who hurt her?
Why is she so stupid like that?
Am I stupid like that, too?
Of course you don't know.
I haven't seen you for years now.
But I won't cry anymore tears now.
If you ever come crawling back,
I'll take my razor and force you to slit your wrists.
I'll see how you like it.
I'll show you what you did to me.
I'll make you feel the pain that you made me feel.
I'll get big men to beat you up. By "accident."
See how you feel.
But it's not just you.
It's also dad number two.
He's annoying as fhuck.
I already said he drinks a lot.
And gambles a lot.
And I already asked why mom likes guys
Like you two.
If I didn't have Harry,
I don't know what I'd do.



14 Comments
Awesome poem.... :)
Thank you. :) It's my first, actually. I feel quite proud about it.
Amazing! Is this about your life?cause if it is feel free to message me any time if u need someone to talk to.evan if its not bout your lufe u can still message me lol
Oh... That was a good poem, but I'm sorry about your dads.....
Oh. My. God.
Wow is all i can say. It's amazing but sad. I hope it's not true tho D:
That was INTENSE!
good job
i totally understan your feelings my Dad and my Mom abandoned me when i was six and my brother was four.
message me if you like anytime my friend.
i luved the poem
Rory.. :(
Who is Harry? Swell decent writing poem including endless amounts of emotion though also consistment of motivation to live an eco friendly life.. It's relavants.
Harrison is my best friend.
Understood. Deecent poem, I appreciate thee response.
Can't you tell your mum? What you feel? Probably not... All I could do is pray for you. For now.
That. Was. Incredible. From the heart, I can tell. It was just beautiful.