My Undiscovered Life
A New Story.
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Chapter 1
Faith Byoko
Faith Byoko is my name. Well, maybe it is. Maybe it's not. I am not with my parents- I'm not just an original girl. I'm an abducted girl, or so I was told by outsiders. But, do I really have to believe the nonsense? Can't I just believe my parents abandoned me, and they took me in?
Your wondering who 'they' are. They're basically my family. We're called, The Darkness. Because we kill, lie, steal, and want. Sounds wrong, but not wrong enough to me. This isn't part of my common sense. Our leader is called: Rayne Duroi. He's kinda strict. Our main officers are called: Ryan Botoki, Hannah Dian, Austin Reah, and Cassandra Pulor.
I've been in this part since I was 10. I'm not sure what happened in my past, that much. All I know is, my parents were mean. Strict. Awful. And that's why I don't believe in those nonsense. My story makes much, much more sense to me.
Your wondering who 'they' are. They're basically my family. We're called, The Darkness. Because we kill, lie, steal, and want. Sounds wrong, but not wrong enough to me. This isn't part of my common sense. Our leader is called: Rayne Duroi. He's kinda strict. Our main officers are called: Ryan Botoki, Hannah Dian, Austin Reah, and Cassandra Pulor.
I've been in this part since I was 10. I'm not sure what happened in my past, that much. All I know is, my parents were mean. Strict. Awful. And that's why I don't believe in those nonsense. My story makes much, much more sense to me.



17 Comments
Love it. :) Next plz. :)
Interesting!
Next please!
Sounds good! Please continue!
Awh! Next please!
please continue
Ooh this is great! :D =33
:O Continue, please! I need more!
awesome ^^ next chapter? xP
This is good! Would you mind if I used this for a book reveiw?
Yep ^^ But i dont know if Im going to make anymore Lol writers block. But i might make one tonight :D
OMG OMG OMG!!! SBARINA? THATS MY NAME THATS MY NAME THATS MY NAME THATS MY NAME THATS MY NAME THATS MY NAME!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Good chapter, too!
BUT THATS MY NAME!!! XD
LOL CONGRATULATIONS I USED UR NAME :D I DIDNT KNOW THAT :3