law and order svu struck again
ok this is my law and order svu story for those who have never seen it svu stands for special victams unit they deal with s*x crimes mostly but have done kidnapp and abuse
my story line
when a young girl is rap-d and beaten the team must race to find the person responsible and put them behind bars before they strike again.
warning contains adult thems and mild languge
Chapter 1
attaked and batterd
its was a late coled winters night and back at the staction police officer ryley he was a small fat chap with a gray beard brown eyes and a shaved head and was getting an ear full off mrs fenton. "im sick and tired of the racket its 11:30 pm and all i can hear is the head banging music from next door" moned the grumpy old women. "ok mrs fenton we'll send an officer round the house right now to sort it out" officer ryley sighed as he put the phone down. "for god sake if i get anougher phone call from that bloody women i swear i will have her number blocked.Tom get over to 23 treson street ASAP before she calls back" he moned holding his head in his hands.Tom arived at the house 15 miniutes later "police open up" he shouted banging on the door.The door swung open "WHAT!!!" said a tall skinny boy quite sharply "whats your name" Tom asked sharply. "Jack why what do you want " "look weve had complaints about the music turn it down please" Tom asked. "ok cool man sorry bout that" said Jack smileing. just as he was about to shut the door both Jack and Tom heard a faint wisper "help me" what was that Tom asked and shined his touch up agenst the green think bushes. "oh my god" he said raceing up toward a figure of a body "hay officer what is it" asked jack suspisiosly "Jack get back in the house now" Jack obayed and went back into the house. tom picked up his radio "yo Ryley come in im going to need an ambulance and get special victams unit on the phone tell them to hurry over, I got a girl about 10 seems to have been beaten and rap-d." said Tom in panic "hay miss you ok there" he asked the young girl turned her head slightly "help me" she wisperd again and blacked out "dont worry helps on the way" said tom takeing his jakect off to cover the half nacked girl.
the next morning the young girl came round in hospital olivia was sitting by her bed "hi how are you today" she asked in a kind voice "who are you" the girl asked moveing slightly away. "im olivia i want to help you after what happend last night do you think you can tell me your name" "Erin but nouthing happend last night nouthing alright" she said in a sceard voice and sobbing "look Erin what happend was not your fault but in order for me to help you. your to need to tell me what happend last night" olivia said in a chalm voice and takeing out a note book and pen. "I cant" said Erin crumpling the white hospital sheet. "he said hed kill me if i did" she pniced and started crying.Just them the nurse came in "mabey you should leave detective the girls is obesly troumtised you can come back later when she chalmer" said the nursed drewing the curtin aroud the gil Olivia nodded and walked out.
back at the office cragin was going beserc "why didnt you demand to stay olivia" he said sharply and banged his fist on the table. "Wohh captin didnt you hear the girl was hesterical there is no way you can talk to anybody in a state like that never mined a 10 yearold." said Eliot defending his partner Olivia. cragin took a deep breath and nodded "alright but by the end of tmorrow i expect to have a suspect" said cragin sharply "we alredy do his names Jack weston the girl was found in his garden" said eliott handing over a mug shot of the mail suspect.Cragin was red in the face "then what are you waiting for get that son of a b-tch in here now" he shouted
the next morning the young girl came round in hospital olivia was sitting by her bed "hi how are you today" she asked in a kind voice "who are you" the girl asked moveing slightly away. "im olivia i want to help you after what happend last night do you think you can tell me your name" "Erin but nouthing happend last night nouthing alright" she said in a sceard voice and sobbing "look Erin what happend was not your fault but in order for me to help you. your to need to tell me what happend last night" olivia said in a chalm voice and takeing out a note book and pen. "I cant" said Erin crumpling the white hospital sheet. "he said hed kill me if i did" she pniced and started crying.Just them the nurse came in "mabey you should leave detective the girls is obesly troumtised you can come back later when she chalmer" said the nursed drewing the curtin aroud the gil Olivia nodded and walked out.
back at the office cragin was going beserc "why didnt you demand to stay olivia" he said sharply and banged his fist on the table. "Wohh captin didnt you hear the girl was hesterical there is no way you can talk to anybody in a state like that never mined a 10 yearold." said Eliot defending his partner Olivia. cragin took a deep breath and nodded "alright but by the end of tmorrow i expect to have a suspect" said cragin sharply "we alredy do his names Jack weston the girl was found in his garden" said eliott handing over a mug shot of the mail suspect.Cragin was red in the face "then what are you waiting for get that son of a b-tch in here now" he shouted



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i havent finnished it yet though just thought i would give you a little taste of what its about need think of some more now lol