My Story
well i don't really know were this is going but here it goes
Chapter 1
BEEP BEEP BEEP 7am
BEEP BEEP BEEP 7am my alam goes of i hit the of switch and clawl out of bed i get dressed have a shower and brush my long brown hair and head down stairs for breakfast then i brush my teeth and walk out the door.
hi my name is sky,sky william's i work at my familys club my band play there sometimes and i work on the tec stuff i am 16 years old and a high school drop out i am a triplet 2 girls 1 boy triplets and i have two older brothers and this well this is my story so why don't you come with me on this ride of my live laugh with me cry with me and feel pain with me.
i walk into the club to the sound of my brother swering and yelling from the lighting deck "what now clinton" i yell up to him
"this stupid thing it does not will not work ahhhh come on you bloody think" i here him yell back i run up there before he kill's himself i tell him to steep away from it and go down stairs he gives me this big brother look but does as i say i crawl under the main bored for the lights and see the problem the main wire has been cut but nothing a little dubt tape can't fix
"clinton can you bring me the dubt tape please?" i yell down to him
"sure thing" he come's running up with the dubt tape and i stick the wire back toghter and there you go the lights turn on clinton and i head back down staries i look at him and ask "is this it is this my life?"
"what do you mean?" he asks back
"i am really going to spend the rest of my life fixing the lighting and sound desk's for the club there has to be more then this there just has to be right?"
clinton just look's at me
and again at the end of the day i just go home and watch tv then go to bed just like every day but little did i know my life was about to change in just secounds every thing becomes diffrent
hi my name is sky,sky william's i work at my familys club my band play there sometimes and i work on the tec stuff i am 16 years old and a high school drop out i am a triplet 2 girls 1 boy triplets and i have two older brothers and this well this is my story so why don't you come with me on this ride of my live laugh with me cry with me and feel pain with me.
i walk into the club to the sound of my brother swering and yelling from the lighting deck "what now clinton" i yell up to him
"this stupid thing it does not will not work ahhhh come on you bloody think" i here him yell back i run up there before he kill's himself i tell him to steep away from it and go down stairs he gives me this big brother look but does as i say i crawl under the main bored for the lights and see the problem the main wire has been cut but nothing a little dubt tape can't fix
"clinton can you bring me the dubt tape please?" i yell down to him
"sure thing" he come's running up with the dubt tape and i stick the wire back toghter and there you go the lights turn on clinton and i head back down staries i look at him and ask "is this it is this my life?"
"what do you mean?" he asks back
"i am really going to spend the rest of my life fixing the lighting and sound desk's for the club there has to be more then this there just has to be right?"
clinton just look's at me
and again at the end of the day i just go home and watch tv then go to bed just like every day but little did i know my life was about to change in just secounds every thing becomes diffrent



7 Comments
.. Is thee title of this story literally titled "my story".. No capital improvement? Interesting, decent writing. Seems quite of a indiviual personal journal which being much likeable although not clerifying every detail.
Resume.
okay you kind of lost me there lol
Sorry, will you continue with this story? In my personal opinion, you should improve this storys title. Such as "My Story" with capital ideals rather than lowercased 'M' and 'S' which kinda creates a dull opening.. In my personal opinion.
Thee first chapter is great!
ok thx i have done that :) and i don't know if i am goign to contine it do you really thing it is good?
(Thee storys title appears much more great of greeting.)
Truly, I really like this first chapter. If you'll like to recieve many fan, viewers of this prehaps attach a image and i'll tell few pals to read this story now (Resume!)
Still great. Did you send this story to your other Quibblo pals yet?
yes i have sent this to my other quibblo friends :)