The Horse Whisperer. ~~An Original story~~
Right, this is an original story. The whole first chapter is real I did it today, every ounce is the truth. From then on I know not where it will take me.
I hope you enjoy this!
All of this I did, All of this I did today... I am The Horse Whisperer...
Jo-Ann!
Keep on Rockin!
The Horse Whisperer
I locked eyes with the terrified beast, pleading silently with my eyes to make it understand I was a friend. I cautiously approached it and reached out my hand tentatively, allowing it to sniff me and take in my scent. It allowed me closer and I could see the pain and fear in its eyes. It's soft, chocolate brown eyes. I reached out and traced one of the many scars on his face.
"You've had a hard life haven't you? Seen many a things." I asked in a whisper, slowly moving closer.
"It's alright I am a friend."
I began to rub its soft, dusty hair.
"You can leave all this behind and run away. Run away with me on your back. Run wild through the meadows. Hear the rush of the wind whip past your ears, smell the pasture damp from the rain." I paused and rubbed his cheek in soothing circles.
"You may even be a noble steed. Listen to your hooves clatter on the flagged cobble stone courtyard as you race across them, carrying a knight on your back. Running into war."
I paused staring him in one, misted eye, “Feel the weight of the armor, feel the exhilaration coursing through your veins.”
"You can be freed from your confines all you have to do it imagine." I whispered.
The horse was breathing slow and steady now, "Feel your muscles flex as you run. I now name thee Cadoc, bear the name well. It is a good strong name…" I murmured. The horses’ eyes became clouded over as if it were in another place, at another time... I guess they don't call me the horse whisperer for nothing....
I hope you enjoyed this. As I said these are the truest words I have ever spoken. Every word was spoken today.
Keep on Rockin!
I locked eyes with the terrified beast, pleading silently with my eyes to make it understand I was a friend. I cautiously approached it and reached out my hand tentatively, allowing it to sniff me and take in my scent. It allowed me closer and I could see the pain and fear in its eyes. It's soft, chocolate brown eyes. I reached out and traced one of the many scars on his face.
"You've had a hard life haven't you? Seen many a things." I asked in a whisper, slowly moving closer.
"It's alright I am a friend."
I began to rub its soft, dusty hair.
"You can leave all this behind and run away. Run away with me on your back. Run wild through the meadows. Hear the rush of the wind whip past your ears, smell the pasture damp from the rain." I paused and rubbed his cheek in soothing circles.
"You may even be a noble steed. Listen to your hooves clatter on the flagged cobble stone courtyard as you race across them, carrying a knight on your back. Running into war."
I paused staring him in one, misted eye, “Feel the weight of the armor, feel the exhilaration coursing through your veins.”
"You can be freed from your confines all you have to do it imagine." I whispered.
The horse was breathing slow and steady now, "Feel your muscles flex as you run. I now name thee Cadoc, bear the name well. It is a good strong name…" I murmured. The horses’ eyes became clouded over as if it were in another place, at another time... I guess they don't call me the horse whisperer for nothing....
I hope you enjoyed this. As I said these are the truest words I have ever spoken. Every word was spoken today.
Keep on Rockin!
39 Comments
I like it so far more!
Thank you Red! I am so passionate about this and it is dedicated to the horse I met today and named Cadoc. I'm pretty sure he had Colic! :'(
It is exactly what happened. Every word written is true.
The photo is of him too.
Poor Cadoc! That's an awesome now for a horse!
I'm liking so far Jo
Thanks!
Wow amazing, spoken like a true author and horse whisperer
write more more more pleeeeasseeeeee.......
thankyouu!
Wow... I guess I am a horse whisperer. Everyone says that I am and you saying that... because all this is absolutely true.
You really don't know just how much that comment meant!
Keep on Rockin!
Your friend and fellow author,
Jo-Ann
no worries XD
great story jo-ann. please keep writing more. i need to hear more.;)
Don't worry I will... I have intrigued myself! XD
Yours Musically,
Jo-Ann Sparrow XD
Regardless of whether being literally true nor prehaps of false statement, this first chapter had been certainly well enjoyed and nearly has such provided ability to create joyful adventuring tears of pure hope. Shall this original story continue? Indeed, this horse whispher has yet to bring more journey!
Such wonderous held in only one chapter; Compliment.
.... Okay your words have humbled me to no end. I am speechless. I am never speechless. To make me, Jo-Ann Sparrow, speechless is no easy feat.
You should be proud.
Thank you so much for your kind words. And yes this will continue.
Keep on Rockin!
Auhh! I am much proud to make such possibility of speechless. As said in message, lively motivator namen Cadoc.. Southern concept of thrill farm ideal.
Welcome Jo- Ann Sparrow.
Auhh! I am much proud to make such possibility of speechless. As said in message, lively motivator namen Cadoc.. Southern concept of thrill farm ideal.
Welcome Jo- Ann Sparrow.
Auhh! I am much proud to make such possibility of speechless. As said in message, lively motivator namen Cadoc.. Southern concept of thrill farm ideal.
Welcome Jo- Ann Sparrow.
XD Thank you!
Welcome.
Glad you're enjoying it!
Keep on Rockin!
Thank You and backatcha.. Enjoy your winter holiday.
Sure am. It's my Summer Holiday here :)
Great.
I love it =)
THANK YOU!
This story makes me want to cry, because I know more than you're telling
I know Myth. I know.
I miss him something terrible. Guess it was my fault, I shouldn't have bonded with him! GAH! Why do I always do this!
I've never bonded before!! I've been close, but with Cadoc. I couldn't help it!
He bonded with me!
DX What am I gonna do??
If you've bonded with something they'll always be there even if it's not a physical form
How true. "The one's that love us never truely leave us." Quoted, Sirius Black.
:) Poetry
Sure is Myth.
Are you gonna continue? Or just going to leave it at that?
I'm CONTINUING!
I have half the chapter written!
Oh and Keep on Rockin!