Athena_Child asks:

Do you think I write good stories? ( Now be honest and please include GOOD criticism if you have any!!!)

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    HalfmetalAlchemist: 12-21-2011 at 8:25 PM

    okay, i say you should describe more, and try to have the reader feel like they are the main character. They should know all the thoughts,and feelings. That's my only tip of advice, otherwise, i could get pickey, but i chose not to, for i don't wanna agarvate you :)

    ~heather_mellissa was here :)

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    Scarlet_Night: 12-21-2011 at 10:31 PM

    i love your stories! reading the comment above made me think and she might be right

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    Free_Wolf: 12-22-2011 at 2:30 PM

    Your stories are amazing

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    lizzy16: 12-22-2011 at 2:34 PM

    ya i ussually some of them aren't really stories their kind of random but their good

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    Athena_Child: 12-23-2011 at 5:41 PM

    thhxx

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    _Wonderstruck_: 12-25-2011 at 10:15 AM

    I like your stories. They have very interesting subjects.

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    Athena_Child: 12-25-2011 at 4:54 PM

    Why? Because most of them are about she-wolves. :P :D Thank you.

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    perseus_posiden_laserbeam: 01-05-2012 at 5:00 AM

    i think u right good stories but u rlly do need 2 be a little more discriptive (no offence intended :/ )

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