A poem I wrote
hehe :)
Chapter 1
Screw chapter titles
Don't cry, my friend
It hurts to see you in pain
But now your going crazy
It hurts to see you insane
It hurts to see you in pain
But now your going crazy
It hurts to see you insane



4 Comments
coool, i just hope you add allittle to it...it seems like it's lacking something....
like what?
It's nice! But short, though, which I think Heather_Mellissa meant!
length, and a meaning...a hidden meaning that the reader has to find out...