The Life Of Emily Dawson
this is just a story that i made up. its probably not very good. :/ Its kinda like a diary thing i dunno.
Sucks to be me! My life is filled with hatred and sorrow. No one cares no one sees me. What am I transparent? Why read this? Dont bother...
Another shitty day I thought to myself. I was getting ready for school because the bus missed me. Forgot me. Of course. Beep Beep! "Cmon get in the car!" my mum yelled. I'm already having a bad morning and my mums not making it better at all! Beep! My mum was going to be late for work. I had to change my pants after my mom got cofee on them for throwing me out the door and making me trip on a rock. I changed my pants to another pair of black skinny jeans that matched my black tank top and my old flip flops. Oh, I almost forgot my grey jacket with the little devil horns on the hoodie! My favorite jacket! I put on the jacket, quickly grabbed my backpack and ran to mums black car that look pure white from all that snow. I slammed the door shut behind me.
"Gees, Its freezing out there." I said. My mum started driving recklessly. She was filled with anger. "Ugh! Emily,What took you so long?" Mum yells. I stared out the window not speaking to her. Me and mum have a social problem. Apparently im a dissapointment to my mother. Like I care. I never needed her. She can just get out of my life! "I should of went to work a half-hour ago!" Mum hollers..."Shouldnt of waited for you." she muttered. I rolled my eyes. "Yea, you think I want to be stuck in a car with you." I muttered in a sarcastic tone. My mum heard me and just glared at me. I didnt even bother looking at her back. I can already tell im going to have another terrible day.
Another shitty day I thought to myself. I was getting ready for school because the bus missed me. Forgot me. Of course. Beep Beep! "Cmon get in the car!" my mum yelled. I'm already having a bad morning and my mums not making it better at all! Beep! My mum was going to be late for work. I had to change my pants after my mom got cofee on them for throwing me out the door and making me trip on a rock. I changed my pants to another pair of black skinny jeans that matched my black tank top and my old flip flops. Oh, I almost forgot my grey jacket with the little devil horns on the hoodie! My favorite jacket! I put on the jacket, quickly grabbed my backpack and ran to mums black car that look pure white from all that snow. I slammed the door shut behind me.
"Gees, Its freezing out there." I said. My mum started driving recklessly. She was filled with anger. "Ugh! Emily,What took you so long?" Mum yells. I stared out the window not speaking to her. Me and mum have a social problem. Apparently im a dissapointment to my mother. Like I care. I never needed her. She can just get out of my life! "I should of went to work a half-hour ago!" Mum hollers..."Shouldnt of waited for you." she muttered. I rolled my eyes. "Yea, you think I want to be stuck in a car with you." I muttered in a sarcastic tone. My mum heard me and just glared at me. I didnt even bother looking at her back. I can already tell im going to have another terrible day.
26 Comments
It's good! Amy sounds like such an attention-hog... xD Please continue.
will do :)
Whoa O.O
what?
Well, it's just that most stories on here are all so bubbly and happy, but yours actually tell the truth of an average teenager's life :)
i know. thx i guess...lol
You're doing good! :P Good luck!
thx. your pretty much the only one who reads this.
Hehe, soon enough, more people will, I'm sure! In fact, I'm sure a lot of people do, but are just too lazy to comment... SO FRIGGIN START COMMENTING! xD
only 12 people reading this....COMMENT!!!! xD
Awesome! Next, please c:
GASP! You commented! Yay! Ok!
i thought that only nubilis would comment and actually READ my story.
Why gasp? xDD
I like this story. It is really good and I think you should keep writing.
okie dokie!
It's great =)
thx
It's really well written!
Oh yeah and a question! How do you make a word thicker? Like the word GASP?
thanks and you use * those things around the words. Example: * Hi! * except without the spaces. Hope I didnt confuse you!
Thanks I get it now!
Next!!! Awesome!!! NEXT!!!
It's really good, please continue!