this story is a poem

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why hello there readers/ quibblo-ers and whatever. haha :D this right here is a poem as said above ^ and i want your oppinon and such. people have told me it should be said as a rap, or something but ya, you people- you need to tell me if this is good and let your critisism flow (but not too much please, i have feelings even though you are looking at a screen, but there is a person here) and ya. okay... go read now. k

Chapter 1

Worlds Gonna Blow

The shades are low,
Everyone’s out of their daily flow,

The weather is fierce and the sky is gray
I don’t know if we are here to stay

The ground is shaking
People questioning why the earth is baking

Why are you so mean,
Why are you so annoying,
Why am I even talking to you?
Everyones minds are soaring
But,I mean, you’re kinda boring

Babies are screaming
Children are weeping
Adults are dreaming
That something good will appear

What are you doing?!

Every one shut up! This is serious now!
Stop fooling around!

Hold up,
Stand your ground,
We aren’t going to be taken down!

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Barnstable, MA, US

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